All Comments on 'It Was His Idea'

For the read.

The word sweet is a little overused in the first couple of paragraphs. Overall though you kind of left it hanging without indicating whether you intend to continue or the end. As a reader I appreciate knowing that.

The tentative answers and hesitation at the beginning of the story fall to the wayside. The tone shifts, the action grows more primal. It's easy to see that Gayle is under his spell. Loved the super hot ending. Five stars.