by RDJohnson
Really hot story, can't wait to read more and hopefully he wins her pussy eventually. You might want to cut bach on the "kiddo", though. It's getting overused.
Nice story - clearly magic in effect or she would have let hum do more in the height of her passion. 5*
Well I didn't get my magic or no magic answer but I am very happily moving onto part 3.
I agree with Defluer, and others. This chapter was even hotter than the first! FIRE!!
X-Man