All Comments on 'It was in the Cards Pt. 06'

I like the ending it was sweet.

great ending and highly erotic

This was an incredible series. Very well written and a perfect ending. Well done.

We’ll after caning your story a few chapters ago you certainly redeemed yourself, this was by far the best chapter by far. Not because the story ended but you showed it wasn’t really a stupid game she was playing, the ending said it all… LOVE ❤️ ..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

So, she figured out the cards were doing something, it appears. Funny, I just read chapter 5 and kind of hinted at the "all in" option. I'm an avid fan you write at least a couple chapters. They are now magically bound forever. Where do the parents fit in? How do they go forward? There's a lot of story left here and, I hope, after a rest you continue on.

hmmmm, what can I say.... it is kinda predicted. the moment when his sister offered her virginity and still want to play the card. kinda give it up

More please

A phenomenal story. 5* love the character build, loved the anticipation. Yes continue please

A little rushed but it fit well. I have become a huge fan, so sit down and get your ass to writing.

Disappointing ending. If you wanted to do something like that you should have made the previous chapters shorter. It's like seeing a movie in which the characters plan something for 1h25 and the last 5 min of the film is the plan being deployed. It's anticlimactic.

I have not commented on the previous parts. But I will do so in the final one. It really was the best story among the incest stories on this site. And I read the top 250 stories. Interesting idea with magic cards + smooth, gradual plot + hot graphic scenes and dialogues + sister + possessiveness + virginity = masterpiece

BEAUTIFUL dream made into a special love

Story.

Worth the wait,

Will there be more?

Well written.

Great story! I loved the premise, too. Your writing is great. Once I started reading, I didn't want to stop.

Thanks

Really good story. Probably the right length but I found myself skipping ahead for more story. Thought it could have ended stronger but still 5/5.

This is one of the best hot story i have read in my life. I love it and i hope that there's more coming.

Excellent series. Loved it all. 5 stars for each.

Reading this, even though it is pure fiction, kept my motor running at max RPM the whole way through. At first, it was because he wanted get his rocks off, but he realized, as did she they both won by giving themselves completely to each other. Loved it. It could have been even more pervy, too.

Loved it!

Wonderful!!! You can keep going on this as you wish. How do the 'magic cards' fit in? Does mom and dad have a kink that hasn't been disclosed? Their future would be nice to know too. Thank you!!!

Absolutely love it.

Very well done!

Looking at th list of your stories you became better as you wrote. I wonder why you stopped? While this was a taboo/incest story it was a wonderful love story. As good as any I have read here. And truthfully, sometimes sisters and brothers do fall in love. Certainly cousins often do. And not just in Kentucky, Alabama, and Arkansas! While other forms of incest are more rare, they most times are far more harmful and abusive as a rule. Thanks for a great story/

This is a great story! Thank you! I look forward to seeing more stories from you!

Really enjoyed this series, great stuff

Really great story. My only complaint was (unless I missed it) was he never outright tells her he’s giving his virginity to her as well. He mentions it in passing, but she never acknowledges it. I felt it could’ve been a powerful moment for them to share. Regardless, thank you for a fantastic story.

Great writing, great word choices. A great sex story from beginning to end! Great job

A wonderful series! It was great all the way through. The ending felt a little rushed, though. The build up to their last virginity could've lasted longer once she'd told him she wanted to do it. Also, that's not where the Hymen is. Still, 5* and I hope you are still writing.