All Comments on 'It Was Just a Short Story'

Things that we never expect sometimes come slipping up on us when we least expect it. You have done that very successfully here!

One of your best efforts. I particularly liked Debbie. She was a very articulate person. But, most of your characters are very articulate. I also like the scenes of Debbie visiting the ex-wife and Robert visiting Debbie's parents.

I have only two quibbles with your story. I don't buy Debbie's parents providing them with a room to sleep together. Also, I can't see Debbie's mother saying the following,

"My goodness, daughter, if love can transcend poverty and hardship --- it sure as hell can deal with financial security."

Boyd

A clever well written story. I particularily like the character of Debbie. This Writer has the ability to draw his characters with an expert eye for details and graphic depictions. Terrific Write!

A bit too much Anal, and a tad too detailed about his wealth. But overall, I haven't liked a story this much in a long time. LYG

Dinsmore,

This is the best yet! There are several authors on this site that I like a lot but you are the master of romance! Ronnie W. and DG Hear come very close, you just come out ahead. Character development and story line are superb. Sometimes the conversations are over the top, sometimes they are in real life too!

Thank You for another great story.

damn this was good!! I enjoyed it.

A warm, loving, "Pretty Woman" style story. Very well written. Don't recall even a dropped letter anywhere.

What else could we want in a romance - a sexy woman, two supportive ex-spouses, three rug rats and a very expensive airplane?

Rich and he can repeat fuck more than any poor man like me.

This surely must rank in the top 25 or so stories

at the site. What a a beautiful and cute tale.

Thank you.

and that is saying something.

You have a way with words that makes for a superlative read.

Well done, it brought tears to my eyes.

I've read your entire library of stories now and I can honestly say that your writing is much more than mundane. Somewhere you have a romantic image of human intercourse, much like many of us, but unlike us, you can pen it.

Thank you.

Absolutely wonderfully romantic tale ... character's which sizzle .. and cry, hurt and love. Very, very well written.

This story has it all: sweet romance, self-doubt, courage, old fashioned courting intertwined with hot (I mean HOT) sex. Thanks for this.

Superb Story.

When you put your mind to it you write a brilliant tale.

YOU are one fine Author.

PURE MAGIC

Many,Many Thanks

Thank you for a sweet, wonderful little short story...

Characters with exceptional character -

You don't met people like those very often -

Must read more of your work.

where the guy is stinking rich and buys his way into a girl’s heart. Can’t we just get past this theme?

Your love stories are so warm and have such a depth to them. As I read this story it was so real, so alive, your characters seem to come alive as I read. Well done Dinsmore. Another 5 star event. You are a very good writer, hopefully we will see new Dinsmore stories here on Lit in the near future.

Interesting read. I was waiting for him to leave her through first half+ of story but it became apparent that only she believed that. I liked his having couple of turbo fan aircraft like in a previous story! Please keep the stories coming. You are definitely one of best authors on this site! Stay Safe!

Baton Rouge Cajun Guy

Nice romance, but you need a better editor. I noticed several homophones, which always interrupts the flow.