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All Comments on 'It Was Just a Walk'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice idea and nice setup but the transition to the ending didn't quite flow smoothly. Very good writing please continue. 4/5 stars

HappyEndingsLoverHappyEndingsLoverover 1 year ago

A very enjoyable read. Nice ending.

A_BierceA_Bierceover 1 year ago

Nice. Very nice.

anubeloreanubeloreover 1 year ago

You got me. And I loved the "twist". Very nice. I went from annoyed that this was in romance, to delighted. 5*

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Cute, and a bit predictable given the category. Still. 5/5.

TrionyxTrionyxover 1 year ago

Very nice first effort. Few typos and grammatical mistakes but overall a fun little story.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 1 year ago

I can usually spot stories with this all-too-common template, but this one escaped me until he got home and started cleaning up. (Why did he fuss over putting the jeans deep in the hamper?) Perhaps this is a good way for people married a long time to rejuvenate their marriage. Never thought of it when it would have mattered. 4*

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Just a guy who love writing hot stories and role playing. On the story side: First, sorry for the spelling and grammar errors. I do try to edit but I still miss a lot. I hope you all can look past them and still enjoy the story. I will try to write more when I can but life is...