It Was Just a Walk

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"I know." she whispers back with a grin in her voice.

Neither of us lasted very long.

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OvercriticalOvercriticalover 1 year ago

I can usually spot stories with this all-too-common template, but this one escaped me until he got home and started cleaning up. (Why did he fuss over putting the jeans deep in the hamper?) Perhaps this is a good way for people married a long time to rejuvenate their marriage. Never thought of it when it would have mattered. 4*

TrionyxTrionyxover 1 year ago

Very nice first effort. Few typos and grammatical mistakes but overall a fun little story.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Cute, and a bit predictable given the category. Still. 5/5.

anubeloreanubeloreover 1 year ago

You got me. And I loved the "twist". Very nice. I went from annoyed that this was in romance, to delighted. 5*

A_BierceA_Bierceover 1 year ago

Nice. Very nice.

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