All Comments on 'It wasn't COVID'
by OffRoadDiesel
- 141 Comments (Page 2)
Anonymous11 months agoThe primary difference between Australia and America is that American citizens won’t voluntarily disarm. There’s over 80 million individuals who admit to owning firearms. That’s double the entire population of Australia. The actual number of gun owners is much higher, because we don’t trust our government, and don’t let anyone know what we own. Because many Americans own more than one firearm, it’s estimated that there’s over 465 million guns in civilian hands in America.
Compared to the 80 million plus gun owners, there’s only about 800 thousand police officers. So, in any confiscation attempt, even if only one percent of the gun owners refuse to comply, they evenly match the police. I promise it would be much more that refuse . The police would be badly outnumbered. Also outside of the urban areas, the sheriffs are generally on the side of the gun owners, and would refuse the order to disarm their neighbors, so the ratio is even higher in favor of the regular American.
If you say that the military will assist the police in this situation, first, there’s a law against using the military for law enforcement purposes. Second, most of the military personnel side with the gun owners and would refuse the unconstitutional orders.
Any attempt at confiscation will be met with deadly force. It will basically kick off another civil war. However, this time it won’t be state against state but rather regular people against the government. How many government officials are willing to die to try to enact a no gun policy?
ZharKhan (ZK)
Anonymous11 months agoUmm, I couldn’t make sense of “Concur was my friend and was able to change my return flight …”
Anonymous11 months agoNot bad at all friend! The idea of calling her parents over was so novel. And I loved that the husband wouldn't put up with that shit. I loathe that cuck nonsense.
I'll definitely follow you. I'm sure you have some great stories to share.
Olgreyfox10 months agoFor first story it is decent enough. I do concur with comment from another about forcing wife to give up child for adoption. Husband is going for divorce so he has no say in the matter. IF it is his then he pays child support.
SteelPaperT10 months agoStarted really good. Ende really bad.
If you have a good storyline, run with it. Do not try squeezing it into 750 words,
enderlocke778 months agoU can't make some give their baby up for adoption at least legally if she wanted a baby so bad any didn't she keep it
Anonymous7 months agoGood story for a first effort and considering the constraints of the 750 word format. Please keep writing. ☆☆☆☆☆
I'm presuming that the reasoning behind the forced adoption (whether enforceable or not being moot) is to prevent the state from coming after him for support if her other guy ghosts her. Men paying support for other men's progeny is no small thing. The enlightened state of Tennesee having made paternity testing mandatory is a nice first step, but only if the courts don't continue to punish men for marrying a cheater and forcing child support on them. The corollary to "her body, her choice" is "his wallet, his choice". Contraception is widely available and inexpensive, and Plan B is available over the counter without age restrictions or reporting.
-My apologies to ORD for going off topic.-
As for the gun thing, one of the revelations of C-19 was what happens in countries where the people fear the government rather than the other way around. There are literally thousands of videos out there of "law enforcement" being more than a little "heavy handed". No small number of them taking place in Oz and the oh so polite Canada.
Mass shootings in the US has no standard definition but is generally defined as any episode where 3-4 or more people are wounded or killed. AKA Saturday night in many if not most Liberal controlled big cities. If one removes gang related shootings the US is on par with most
other "civilized" nations. The MSM reports breathlessly every time a crazy person runs amok with a firearm, but usually fails to mention that in a great many cases the individual had been reported as dangerous or had prior encounters with law enforcement and was then neglected. Also, while I'm sure many heard about the school shooting in Nashville which killed 6 and injured 29, how many heard about the SUV attack on a Christmas parade in Wisconsin which killed 6 and injured 62? Where were the cries for "common sense SUV control"?
Take this as an article of faith, your institutional media has an agenda and plays up, plays down, ignores, or plain out lies in its reporting on a regular basis. Look up "Gell-Mann amnesia" and take note of how often it happens once you're aware of it.
EOR
Oldmantrucker6 months ago4 your first story 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍🤷🤷🙋🍕🍕❓❓🍺🍺😉.not bad... Now scratch your head..... And do it Again.. lets see what you can do !!! 🤔🙃😉🙋👍
Anonymous5 months agoTaking a woman's baby is the cruelest thing you could do. I guess the cheating skank slut would need some serious therapy.
LT56linebacker5 months agoNo, buddy. he sent Karma to help you out. Great story. 5 stars, but too short. some times these 750-word yarns are a bitch. I just finished your other one, This one is better. Again, more, PLEASE>
The BEAR
Anonymous5 months agoGood first effort. I like a reign of terror better but hey cannot have everything.
Anonymous5 months agoPS: The wife had to agree to give up a child even if her husband was the father…..
Anonymous5 months agoHaving read both of your stories all I can say is , I look forward to more of your writing . I like your ideas and while not advocating for violence, I understand the desire first hand . Thank you
Anonymous5 months agoHoping for more of your writing. Read both stories & thoroughly enjoyed them both... plus your sense of humor (inbetween the parentheses) 4 stars Bob
Chimo19615 months agoWhy would she give the baby up if you were divorcing her? Try making your stories make sense. It was a needless detail that derailed your efforts. 4
Anonymous5 months agoReally like your style of writing. And for the faint of heart - what's wrong with I little violent payback now and then. Cheaters don't care about the mental and emotional damage they cause so why not give them a little (or a lot) of physical pain and discomfort to deal with.
Anonymous5 months agoI read both your stories, and gave them a score of 5. Keep burning the bitches!
Anonymous5 months agoGod loves you. But just the same as He won’t prevent you from sinning against others, He won’t prevent them from sinning against you. Agency is paramount. So is accountability, which means that they will suffer eventually. Adultery is very, very difficult to repent of, because, like murder, no restitution is possible. She can’t go back in time and choose better. She can’t unfuck him. She can’t pay her husband four extra fucks for each fuck she had with the other man, because if she’s capable of extra fucking, that already belongs to her husband.
ZK
sbrooks103x5 months agoIf they're getting divorced, what's it to him if she keeps the baby, not that he'd have any say, anyway? He could have maybe used giving up the baby as leverage for the divorce, but the divorce is a done deal.
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My count was 755 words, including the 17 words that you said don't count!
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Yes, 750 words isn't easy, that's why you shouldn't do it just for the heck of it.
inka22225 months ago@sbrooks - "what's it to him if she keeps the baby"? The answer is right there in the story. It hurts her. Given that she planned to fuck him over permanently by making him pay for and raise someone else's baby, I think that was a very very very minor small revenge. Considering the fact that mummy's a selfish narcissistich sociopath, the baby's better off with adopted parents, so hopefully nobody is dumb enough to claim that this was somehow "bad for the innocent child".
inka22225 months agoVery very nice story. 4.3 stars for a somewhat depressing ending for MC, rounding up to 5 stars due to both 750 format which I respect, and just to spite pro-cheaters downvoting this.
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Re: her agreeing to give up the baby: the story is 750 so doesn't explain it, but the implication seems to be that she wasn't willing to test the willingness of her victim to refrain from violence. Good for him.
skruff1013 months agoThe adoption angle doesn’t work, making it a demand to negate violence would see him in jail just for the threat (which was made in front of witnesses) alone.
Anonymous3 months agoNo wonder CindyTV strongly urged you to write this piece of shit instead of pushing it on her. She is much too talented to write this turd.
Aredia2 months agoKinda depressing, but I can't fault you for that as my first written piece depressed me! Nicely written - please do write again.
[FYI, bikers are now saying "It's not _what_ you ride, it's that you _do_ ride." Translating that into weapons ownership, "It's not what you shoot, it's that you do shoot." ]
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