All Comments on 'It Wouldn't Be Fair'

by richardbedfordwhite

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Rob5373Rob5373over 3 years ago
I agree with Wylie

These “let’s fuck some body else hall passes” seldom work to make a marriage better. There always wind up crating emotional and physical ties which destroy the marriage not to mention the jealousy that comes with the affairs. Nope, didn’t work for me. Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"I understand that you have enormous sexual energy and that if you ever wanted to take on an anonymous lover on the road I would completely understand."

That's so sweet. Could you please give us your address and your wife's phone number? We be so thankful for your effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice plot line!

You've offered a distinctive (unique?) angle on a somewhat stereotypical story line. Your development and presentation of the characters is complex and agreeable. Your decision to end the "free pass" arrangement is realistic and wise. Such arrangements in "real life" are inherently unstable, especially if the premise is they begin with a "happily married" condition.

Good offering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another one bite the cuck-crap

And you are still talent free.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

You have a thing for wigs, disquises, and silly games. Didn’t really like this one, as I find the concept of hall passes ridiculous.

premshankerpremshankerover 3 years ago

Hall Pass is just an opening, surely Claire will go beyond Josh.

Once tasted she will go for forbidden fruit all out, disguise Bruce will unable to detect

NitpicNitpicover 3 years ago
Load

Load of crap.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Crappy CUCK story!!!

MightyheartMightyheartalmost 3 years ago

Crap Cuck story

Rubbish !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Garbage

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyalmost 3 years ago

Crazy … Fun … but oh yeah Crazy

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

If she really was concerned about her husband giving permission, then why was she allowing him to service her orally before speaking with her husband?

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