by Evil Alpaca
Each chapter keeps getting better and better! I'm sure I'm not the only one here with your author's page bookmarked, continually checking for the next chapter to be posted. Again, bravo! :-)
Fantastic! I love this story! I can hardly wait for the next part. thank you.
I'm on the edge of my seat and then the story ends. There are no words that describes how good these stories are, they are by far the best stories i've ever read. i just can't waite for the next chapter. your storie is truly the best ever, please think about publishing them.
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Great, just leave us hanging to wonder what happens next, the lady or the tiger. Great work though. Please finish or continue the story.
The action, the suspense does not let up! And I am almost sizzling with anticipation. Grrreat!
Amazing story. The plot, the characters, the universe, everything is well made and thought through.
I've only found one inconsistency and that is the location of the Point. In chapter one it's located in France, and in this chapter it's located in North Carolina.
I can't wait to get on with the rest of the story.
Amazing story. The plot, the characters, the universe, everything is well made and thought through.
I've only found one inconsistency and that is the location of the Point. In chapter one it's located in France, and in this chapter it's located in North Carolina.
I can't wait to get on with the rest of the story.
almost seems like things are settled down for eliza but back on terra, she's different now... unique. i sense intriguing plots ;)