All Comments on 'It's a Man's World Ch. 05 - Claimed'

I really like the story so far and hope you'll write further chapters.

The only slight critique that I'd like to make, is that personally I found it a bit long winded. I prefer stories which are a bit more concentrated. In short, more action, and less description. This is a personal preference and I am aware that other people may disagree. Also, I don't mean to say to get rid of the descriptive part, but just shorten it a tad. Again overall a good story, and I look forward to new adventures of Tony, Alex and Gwen.

Looking forward to the next chapters!