All Comments on 'It's About Time'

Nice tender story, the only thing I dodn't like was the constant changes of font, hence only 4 stars. If this was your first then a good start (much better than mine!) and hope to see more from you.

The story is sweet and touching. Basically, I liked it. There are some logic inconsistencies, though, and they detract from the reading of the story. For example, back on p.1, there is a reference to going "back to the hotel" and then later, the hospital (ten minutes away) involves Chad going across the street to a hotel. After that, James is still hobbling around on his injured leg, but a few hours later, is carrying CJ to the bedroom. And there's the trivial detail of Connor vs O'Connor. Understand, I liked the story; there's just some editing you would want to do on your next work to avoid these small problems.

-- KK in Texas

The "across the street from the hospital" is easily explainable... their original hotel wasn't close enough and they wanted a closer one.

There is another one tho, right at the beggining. Supposedly they're best friends, roommates and so forth, and she doesn't know that his biggest race in a while is next weekend?

Other than that, I liked it, it's a very good first time and I hope to see more in the future!

Loved every single thing about this. This story was just great. Would love to see it continue on somehow....maybe them having a wedding, family, etc...

All in all.....excellent! Hope to see more from you!

This was just an outstanding story! I really loved it. Thank you for such a beautiful tale.

A really nice read... The ending brought a happy tear to my eye.

This is my FAVORITE story on this WHOLE site.

Keep writing!

This story has to be one of my favorite romance stories I've ever read. I really liked how he proposed, I've been to one of their concerts and I think that that would be the best way to propose. 5***** toby9790.

I have to say, you did a fabulous job with this story! It was so sweet and touching I literally have tears in my eyes! Great Job!

This story feels a bit like a parade of every cliché ever. The great thing about this story, however, is that it doesn't matter.

It's a great read.

And by I bit, I mean it's the most cliché story I've ever read. But that doesn't mean it wasn't a good story. In fact it was a great story. I loved it. The writing was fantastic.

Perfect!!!! I love best friends to lovers stories with happy endings.