All Comments on 'Its All In Your Head'

A good start to a story, but too short I think. Also, I think this belongs in erotic couplings more than romance. The characters need to be brought out more and made interesting. Sex will be in the story line, but I also look for the story and how they got there. I gave you 3 stars because you need to work on your writing. I appreciate your efforts and putting yourself out there for people to read your work.

2* for trying. People sound like stick figures talking. Perhaps the author is using English as a second language. People are not close to being real and I think further work with this plot is a waste of time.

I agree with dickhead. Started a new one. (good advice though)