by oggyoggy
That cleared some things up. Though there are still some mysteries. IMO, the best chapter so far. I'd bet he has a lot more family to plow through though, (figuratively, in more ways than one), and some more secrets to discover. For example, Joyce liked it too much? I can just see his reaction to how many women ended up face down between his mother's thighs. She probably was a bisexual seduction phenom. And he thought she was strait laced. Ha! What other secrets and treasures will he discover? I cant wait to find out. Solid five from me.
Jedd
Well that was fun till you decided to include nonconsential rape. If alcohol acts like a date rape drug on the woman, then him knowingly fucking her in this state is tantamount to rape. Not my thing. Next time include this in the tags so reader doesn't waste time.
Shame because it was a fun story, fairly well written.
Another go chapter but I also thought the alcohol induce inhibition was wrong but this part overall was still hot.