by Oblimo
By the second chapter, I thought that the story line was going to get boring with "the same 'ole stuff" but I was wrong. You took it to a new level and now it is more than a stroke story and I thank you. Looking forward to the next installment.
-V-
seriously dude, this story has by far surpassed most of my expectations. the leveL of writing is unbelievable and is worthy of being more than a story on a website.
This story has far supassed all m expectations... I was sceptical after the first chapter but now im hooked, This story should be boxed and sold ... Just let us see the finsih before you ever do that ...
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Great story I loved it and can't wait to read more!!! Keep on writing