All Comments on 'It's Complicated Ch. 02'

Great!!!! I am so glad that I found your story. I am really enjoying it. I hope you continue to write. Keep up the good work. =)

But this made no sense. It's hard following the characters. I couldn't figure out who exactly was angry and who and why and... it was very confusing.

I really like this story. I hope you keep posting more updates . I think somtimes other commenters forget these stories are just for FUN and Not for english lit..

I am actually a student at MSU so that already gives you my vote but, aside from that the writing is great! I'm interested in seeing where this is headed!

Keep it up!

I'm really liking this story so far and am interested to see where it goes. Keep it up...

I think its great that you find fun in writing. Your style is very unique. Most would call this choppy writing, but it works. Keep it up!!!!!

I am interested in seeing if they get together. Pierce is a dog and all the woman on campus knows it but they still keep coming back for more. As for his best friend I can undestand why they are friends but clearly she is attracted to him and her boyfriend knows that. Wonder why he thinks that he will be able to separate the two especially since she followed Pierce to MSU. I can't wait to read about the meeting that he as with his father. Thanks

Your story to me is great! But it would be a lot better if you took the time to go over it again...or get an editor.

Love Pierce