by Marriedkinkylife
five stars. you have a mind like a sewer........i like it. thank you for posting
Not sure how there it gets better. There should be tons of comments here. Good well thought out story. 1954hall
Bet those fucked up puppies eat this shit up. Good luck with it.
Curious: what's his being married to a pitiable woman who has lost all desire for her low life husband got to do with the plot? Does his wife play some role in this story, other than cheated on spouse?
Stupidity and poor judgement must run in these sisters' family. Scott is cheating on his wife of many years and this is not the first time he has done so. He is betraying her trust and exposing her to the risks of three sexual partners without her knowledge. His duty to her far exceeds that he owes to fuck buddies. They will be lucky if he doesn't steal out of their wallets.
They should clearly see that Scott will violate their trust without guilt or regret if doing so would serve his own selfish interests. Scott is the only person who matters to Scott. They should run far away from this man who has no integrity.
Wonderful story! You are an excellent writer! Please keep sharing your stories with us!
Even for a fictional story on a porn site these were truly people of the gutter. UGH!
1 star
Go take a CyclonB shower and free us from your existence.
Well worth the wait since your last posting. OK some things I'm not personally keen on, the gay side of things between Mike and Scott, but that's me. Everything else is fine and well written.
Interesting that the negative and abusive comments come from those bravo souls Anonymous.
I'm not in on the marital "sharing", but the domination is well written and decidedly thought out.
a few grammatical errors - but-
good read
Smokepole
“And I did keep my word.” Except the most important, his wedding vows!
I wasn’t expecting the sister action or the guy on guy but you had me so in the moment that it just seemed right. Great writing. I will say this though I’d be happy to know what was going on with Scott’s wife. I honestly thought that maybe the big ask was going to be inviting his wife to play with them.
They should all take a ZyclonB shower together. The plastic after the lights comes on will be amazing. Korrekt !
Folks, it's a fictional, kinky story. This is why I come here. If I wanted to read inspiring, highly moral stories, I'd be at church.
Well written, highly enjoyable. Did have a 3some with twin redheaded English girls, so long ago they're probably old grandmothers now.
Thanks for the entertainment, keep it up!!
AJ
Great fun. Can’t quite understand why readers of a Loving Wives story would want characters to be monogamous; this is a nice plot. Loved the way you allowed Mike into the story but stayed focused on the main action. But you do need an editor or at least a proofreader.
Wonderful story, -so very well-told that, even the multifarious, multi-aspect, multi-tiered and very liberal angles of oral sex were really tastefully done (fully-groan-pun admitted)!
So, very well done you, IMHO, this is something of a a masterpiece, so ten-stars out of five!!
thank you..
R.S.