All Comments on 'It's Good To Be Me Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
There's confident then sounding like a douche bag

The first paragraph turned me off the story completely, you can make your main character have confidence which is fine, but those first couple of paragraphs made him sound like a complete douche bag.Turn it down a notch and make him sound more human, also he doesn't always have to be endoud with a moster size cock and be your typical sports jock.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Okay

Why was he so worried seeing 'Same' after the shower. Titty wife had just told him 'same' knew and saw the video. He was even wearing 'cloths'.

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