All Comments on 'It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
always keeping better

I LOVE this story: hot,sensual,sexy,romantic,emotional.... (although I dislike a little Sonja's character and the "kinky" side that give to this chapter). hope to read next installment soon.XXX

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice Plot- too many grammar mistakes

Hi, I like the plot of the story, but the many grammar mistakes really jump out while reading. I stopped reading at one point 'cause it was so annoying and distracting. Sorry...

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