All Comments on 'It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 09'

I read all the chapters today and I can't wait to read how Alex reacts to those pictures.

suspension of disbelief is all well and good...

but this story is too twisted, and nonsensical.

you need to spend more time on the story, and make sure that the actions of each character make sense with the overall plot

you need to proofread your work. good stories are ruined by bad grammar!!!