All Comments on 'It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 13'

how absolutely wonderful and addicting your stories are. it nearly killed me with all the suspense and emotional tension. the characters, good or evil, are all superbly created. i don't even care about the flaws, it was almost perfect!!

although i think Alex is way too bound up in secrecy, and screwed up. they really should see a marraige counselor - of get Alex a psych.

um, ciggarette burns from torture are usually deep and leave lasting scars that need plastic surgery; those woulda been the kind Sonja left, not the minor blister of an ember falling off onto skin.

the series had weak and strong chapters, but overall was good. kudos.

Double Wow!

brilliant. You did something few people can do. You wrote a great story that was exciting, sensual, and sad at times. The reader will feel this story. I want you to know that I was very impressed with how much your writing grew. It simply got better and better. I am hoping that someone acknowledges this through an award. Thanks, I loved every word you wrote.

Excellent job on the plot despite the poor grammar. Keep up the good work. Get an ed for your next story assume you are going to write anymore stories.

Phil

Thank you for this "keeper" in ours minds & fantasies, it has been such a steamy and talented trip. Thank you so much and I'm waiting eagerly your next work.

this was ana wesome story. thanks a lot for giving us the raw, un-edited version, cuz it was the best. ur writing is awesome and the best story i've ead so far.....

I loved this story, apart from the many spelling errors! This story just drew me in and i loved it so much.

You made me love this site again!!

Nice!!! i like your story! got so engrossed in it i just finished it... gosh does my eyes hurt :p

the story was really good, although difficult to follow at times due to the lack of grammar...

also, much as i loved alex and aida, i think you could have spent more time developing their characters and have them interact more.. show a deeper level so that their love doesnt seem to be lust-based.

awesome effort though, especially for your first story. hope you post more stories soon! thanks and best of luck :D

This story had it all great description and emotion. The characters were extremely well developed. The drama was off the charts. Of course, your English writing Professor would be point a finger at you for not getting this edited. I never expected this story to come out the way it did. It was a well done and wild enjoyable ride. Thank you for the entertainment, I read it straight thru.

Wonderful and riveting with plenty of twists and turns.

Love it ! Thanks ! Can't wait for your next story.