by Ellafun
Nice quickie story that pulled me in and left me satisfied.
You have a GREAT and creative... dirty mind... I luv it!! Ace
Excellently written. Of course we need to know the next 20 or so chapters of Ella's story. Based on this beginning after a couple more chapters you could be in my top 10 favorite authors.
Looks like your first submission is a hit - congratulations and keep'em coming :-)