All Comments on 'It's Love But There's A Problem'

Beautifully written.

Great story, want to see how it develops, some minor editing required

Good story. You left the door open for at least a part 2. It would be worth reading to see their relationship progress or end.

ANDDD ???

Good but something is missing, seemed to sterile/

*****Very entertaining read. Nice piece of storytelling! Thanks for sharing.

I read this with my morning coffee and thoroughly enjoyed it. The teasing and then the sex were stimulating. Please add more, the door is open.

Great work. Hope you have Part 2 in mind.

Good story. But now that Bobby has seen her sister, will he have both of them move in with him? Maybe impregnate both. Wow, that would be hot!

Well written, plausible and not contrived. Keep it up.

Very good story. To me, it would have been excellent to read about the next scene, where Bobbie explains his transformation, along with Sia’s thoughts of skepticism and ultimate acceptance. I enjoy reading stories like this. Good work.

I would suggest that this could be under Romance as easily as Mature. Your romantic nature certainly comes out in each story you write, and that's what makes you better than most. Nicely told.

~B

Great job, thanks for sharing your work. I enjoyed the story very much.