All Comments on 'It's Not All About Her'

Reece always will have the murdered baby of hers by abortion to keep her warm at night

Didn't know Hooked1957 writes cuck stories now. Finally surrendered to the inevitable. Being a Cuck

She shot herself in the foot!

5

Good story -- and "Traci" wasn't the name of any character! (we know -- makes the story easier to edit if you don't have to check that you've maintained the character's name all the way through.)

Tight, A great read.

5 stars

Cagivagurl

better than the other one i read

Another wimpy cuck story from crooked1957….. a clueless husband…a slut wife…and shithole story overall!

Jesus, wasted a lot of time. Love is not an excuse to accept disrespect. That should be fairly obvious but too many get stuck behind fear of losing what they have not realizing it's already gone or nearly lost.

You NEED to edit! 'Reece' can't through his wife on the bed, she can throw herself on the bed. How can you not NOTICE glaring errors like that?

Delete 1st 8 paragraphs about Jada in Hawaii. Irrelevant, unnecessary, and confusing since generic female (Jada) is unidentified. Story really starts with long flashback.

Two Hooked1957 posts on a Monday. It should be a great week! 5* from me.

Well written description of the modern Western woman. Told the lie they can have a high powered career, children, husband and lovers. The author has corrected that Fata Morgana.

A wimp i figured...reece was a red flag from the start. But wimps always ignore red flags even when they see them and hope their slut partners will magically change when they're done slutting around.

I honestly don't understand why he didn't divorce her the first time? 😕... counseling only works if the person is remorseful, and is HONEST about their transgression.. this wife never really admitted to the affair with John, her 60yro boss. She was banging him for months before his dumb ass found out.. he would've still been eating John's cum out of her, had it not been for his friend.. what baffled the entire fuck out of me was how quickly he was able to go back to trusting her. That's the problem when you break trust.. it's almost impossible to get back. And even if you do get it back, it won't be the same intensity. No way in hell he would've been trusting her to go out of town for "work" and not wonder, is it really for "work"?🤔.. no way he'd just believe what she tells him without verifying it first.. is anyone shocked that she was back to sucking and fucking strange men? 🤭😂😂😂😂😂🤭...I'm more shocked at the MC lack of brain matter.. again if someone hadn't told him about his slut wife, he would've continued to play her fool. 🙄.. the police had to tell him his whore wife was in the company of a man when she had her accident...it never occurred to him she would be back to riding strange dicks on her "business trips".. why? Because he went back to completely trusting her again after her 1st affair with john... when she started disrespecting him, and thinking she was better than him, still nothing.. he's at home waiting for her to return when she's done fucking a new guy🤭... why was he so wimpy? I don't understand why this marriage lasted so long? He told his attorney he didn't hire a PI because once he sees it, he can't go back...ummm😒😒, was he planning on giving her a 2nd/3rd chance?.. I don't understand why he would say that? It's like he held out hope to reconcile with her.. why? That relationship/love was one sided like mothafucka.. I would've wanted to know EVERYTHING.. he knew he couldn't get answers from her.. she can lie to him, while looking him dead in the eyes. She can downplay what she did.. like telling him it was only 5 guy.. sure😏🙄🤭....what about the abortion she had? The abortion she had done secretly as a result of one of her "business" trips. Meanwhile, she reneged on giving him children.. he would've knew exactly what type of cum guzzler he was dealing with had he hired a PI. her treachery ran deep. She fed him a cream pie on probably more than one occasion. Where was this "Love" she supposedly had for him? She didn't even respect him enough to douche her pussy out or tell that man she had a headache.. anything would've been better than giving him a cum soaked pussy. She wasn't remorseful she did it. Hell she missed the sex with John.. that should've told him she would stray again.. let's also not forget when he told her not to dance with John and as soon as he went to go piss... she didn't even blink when he came up to her and asked her to dance.. where was the respect for him?.. I didn't see it😂😂😂..she knew her marriage was hanging by a thread. Why would she disregard his wishes? .. I saw a woman who believed him to be a wimp who loved her so much....she could do whatever she wanted to do and fuck whoever she wants and he isn't going anywhere.. had it not been for his friend and her car accident , she probably could've kept this up 40yrs or more.. he would've still been the fool.. there's a reason most just cut their loses and divorce a cheater.. the relationship will never be the same. And forgiveness (depending on the cheater) set precedents.. it tells the cheater, 'oh, they forgave me once, he'll forgive me again"... my favorite is "he loves me so much, he wouldn't risk losing me"😂😂😂😂😂😂😂.. I find the delusional sluts most fascinating and hilarious. I guess I should just be glad the MC finally got his head out of his ass to see what was right in front of him. I thought it would've been another stupid nonsense reconciliation.. I didn't like how he just stood back and allowed her to get away with so much.. cause he didn't really want to know. He didn't want to realize he's been an idiot this whole time.. when he found out about john.John.. he should've immediately divorced her and found someone who wasn't capable of lying to him, cheating on him and disrespecting him.. there's way too many fish in the sea to be holding on to something so toxic it could literally get you sick.. if she got pregnant by one of her affairs, that tells me she wasn't using protection, so it was fuck him and fuck his health. She would've eventually brought him home cream pies, side babies and STDS... life is too short to be wasting it on folks who aren't worth it.. she wasn't worth it.. he wasted a lot of time on the slut when he should've just moved on.. that saddened me a bit

Great ending.

It was good but just seemed to wither out.

Just a sad ending

For ‘When a man loves a woman’ read delusional idiot, he could have ended that shit many years previously.

It took awhile to get there, however I did enjoy the ride

Really nice -- 5*!

Good story. She got off better than she deserved.

The dialogue near the end, about having children, seems highly compressed. We go from 'time to end things, this isn't going to work. to 'let's go make babies' in like 30 seconds, perhaps less, depending on pauses in the written dialogue. Just not very... realistic. Willing to pull the eject lever that easily, without even having the discussion first? Alarm bells there for him, if nothing else. Another half page or so would have made it far more believable.

Sorry, he was already a cuck by page 2. To allow it to go one second further, to stay married to her while she kept working in the same company as that asshole, who got off too easy? Then to just blindly 'get over it' after a while? Oh, hell no. He literally had this coming. Almost from the get go. her attitude initially was enough to turn anyone that thought with more than his eyes or his dick off.

Thanks for sharing...

By your previous works, this one is to congenial.

Thanks again

So many wasted years with a woman he could not trust. He was too old to spend quality time with his kids and grandkids.

After the Christmas party, she's likely no longer climbing the corporate ladder, maybe it's time for kids.

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Since she was the high earner, I suppose he got maintenance?

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I didn't catch it at the time, had to go back and see that his wife at the beginning wasn't named.

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Truthandjustice, can we leave politics out of this?

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Annie, how is it cuck? Just because he didn't dump her right away>

Another story that finally gets it together in the end, but by then it's too late and you don't really care any more.

Anybody allowing their spouse to disregard them in the way Traci did to Glenn deserve whatever they get when they don't stand up for themselves. They both need to be run through a wood chipper. Him for being so weak and stupid and her for being the toxic narcissist she is.

Incredible how all the characters are of a distressing stupidity.

The situations are stupid, the sentences are downright stupid.

Ah, he loves me too much to...

But that's only.....

You certainly have writing skills, so please try to write characters with a higher IQ than a baboon.

The point of the story is Griff was blinded by love and filled with insecurities. Reece mentions the word love many times, but that word only applies to herself. Griff loves Reece. Reece loves Reece. Griff didn't hire a PI because he was afraid of learning the truth; the fact she didn't love or respect him, and then having to act and cut her off his life. Griff may have been a great accountant, but he was an insecure man acting like an Ostrich in order to remain in the dark. The end was predictable since the first unfaithfulness, the only question was... when? Thanks for the story.

Good story! 5*****!

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I liked two things in particular. First, she took a break from cheating. That's unusual here. It shows a degree of calculation overriding impulse that she later throws away. Second, I think she demonstrated very clearly that some people need extra validation and cannot stand to be alone. That speaks volumes in terms of character development.

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And some people don't know the definition of "cockold", but they do like to throw it around. I suggest that the author ignore them.

You really could have done better with your transitions from scene to scene; I had to read twice to make any sense out of the move from HI to the meeting of Reece in college.

Some bitched about other proofing mistakes, but I took them in stride. Still think you are one of the best writers on this site and thank you for the effort. Hard to beat a GOOD and a CHEAP read. CD

2* for another weak cucky obtuse husband character. MC must like being abused. He should have dropped corporate climbing whore when she said she was to delay kids the second time.

He is not a cuckold. A cuckold love a bitch with many lovers and wear a cock cage.

I suspect this happens more than we want to admit: The offended spouse only ever sees the tip of the iceberg with how much their spouse was cheating.

I liked it, but he was a little too deaf, dumb and blind for my tastes. And you left out the juicy details of their divorce, like her paying HIM massive alimony and him getting a great split.

God job in describing a selfish and disgusting woman

By letting her off the hook the first time, it accelerated her perceived superiority to the point where she felt entitled to have other men and inevitably lowered his worth at home and in the marriage. It was a bad situation that could only end poorly. This is the reason for the cliche, once a cheater always a cheater. Sure there are plenty of exceptions, some people change and never cheat again, but usually there is a huge reckoning involved, with the cheater needing the cheated too much to give up the marriage (financial, children, total remorse) A one time incident is survivable when the cheater maybe confesses and shows remorse, but this woman was too far gone.

She was a slut, had a early warning, should have moved n then. Wasted to many year as she slept around and no kids to fill the home with crazinesses. That’s good crazy

Didn't do it for me

Not bad…but the misdirection of the 1st few paragraphs actually fell flat in the end. The story could have been just as good without the 25th anniversary setup.

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Wow…Reece was a piece of work! He was well rid of her.

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Story suffered some by not providing a little more about new wife Jada.

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Bottom line…just an average plot albeit well written.

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3 ***

The scene where she looked at the man’s hand for a ring jangled a nerve. I have not worn a ring since about our 15th anniversary. It was at that time that she told me of her 2-year affair with a man who rented a room in our house, followed by a short affair with a fellow choir member. We are now on year 45. Yes, still married, stayed because young girls need their mother, and yes, I am a chicken, and now, her dementia. Anyhow, no ring does not necessarily men “not married.”

Well told 5 star.

I've read two Hooked1957 stories today.

And although well written.

My opinion only == I didn't like it.

Of all the stories in LW I think I for the first time, today hated Hooked husbands.

Told myself that both husbands deserved the pain they were dealt with by cheating wives because they did nothing for long. Two husbands SIMPs and wimps.

And what I got riled about these two stories?

The ending of both sure SUCKED.

I get two pages or more to read about the husbands getting cucked.

And when the tide turned against the wife and the husbands getting their fair justice, Hooked1957 just gave me a few paragraphs.

That really sucked.

This was a typical LW story, however the ending was surprisingly abrupt. Four stars ⭐️ for this one.

His wife was a CEO of a global corp and was using her job as the impetus of her infidelity. She says she was making 7 figures. I woulda got the PI and then sued her for divorce and the company for not enforcing their ethics rules...payday here I come....alimony to pay for me and my young blondes penthouse...the best revenge is making her pay for your dope life.

Something that always bugged me was the saying, ala a great President, is "trust but verify".

Surely one of the pillars in a relationship, especially marriage, is trust. Would a idealistic life long relationship really survive the strains and rigors of career and life with one party constantly verifying?

Obviously Griff didn't do it even after the first foray of cheating came to light. It seems like he was in love, blind love. Tricky one there. Hell, you can't even trust yourself totally.

Still a good one,

Had SO MUCH potential, yet died in the arse at the end!

A great non-Traci story. Ignore the people who wave 'cucK" as their comments. The story fell perfectly in the theme of "°When a Man Loves a Woman". 5 stars.

But could have been better. Your still a good writer

Well constructed story although I would argue Simone as competent as Griff would not have been so clueless the second time around. Rounded up to 5*!

Good tale, sad in parts but a happy ending. Loved it.

Hooked usually hits line drive five's, and this "WAMLAW" posting (1st of 3) is no exception. Interesting that in both this and the dtiverson, we have pill failure causing a pregnancy. With less happy results here, though all turned out well for Griff in the end. Reece, a bit less so, but she made her choices, and that's that. She reminds me of the FMC's in "Was It Worth It?" by CaseyEdwards and "Was The Cost Worth The Benefit" by SFbullrider, with maybe a little "Everything For The Career" by HeavyHeartsLament thrown in. One of the reasons H57 is so consistent is that he tends to give us satisfying endings where the good guy wins. Like here.

Would love a rewrite without a dimwit husband.

You play, you pay! Nice that she got the short end of the stick.

Thanks. Fair read. Three Stars.

I agree with the reviewer ReadyOne. The beginning of the story: was not a clever, snuck that one by us switch. It was just confusing.

You could have probably tweak the beginning a bit and put it at the end an improved whole lot, as the end as written was only so so.

Her narcissistic personality did her in. Husband could only put up with it so long, longer than I would have put up with it.

Good story, well written. Thanks for sharing.

Some actual men and women would be a breath of fresh air after these pathetic stories. I think you did your best, considering the Theme. Its kind of like throwing a surprise birthday party for a woman turning 40: She hates it, and everyone else regrets her sadness. But that's what real life is like for some people. This series is starting to get as obnoxious and maudlin as the February Sucks stories. Still, thanks for the effort.

I noticed at the beginning the wife's name wasn't mentioned. So he was in Hawaii having a 25 year reunion with, not Reece! Good story, read another exactly like this one months ago. 5 BIG ONES!

Great classic LW story, well told and enjoyable.

Thank you for an interesting story about entitlement being presumed - and taken too far. Griff was very slow to realise what was happening but he wanted, wrongly but not unbelievably, to trust that she was faithful.

This guy's a wimp. He told her he was tired of having her treat him with disrespect for the LAST FEW YEARS??? Years??? Really? Who puts up with that for YEARS??? I know my wife wouldn't, and she knows I certainly wouldn't tolerate it from her.

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I won't take that off a stranger without getting in their face, so why in world would anyone put up with that from someone who's supposed to love them? It's not even a red flag: it's a death knell for your marriage. Unless she's got some humdinger of a story about what a horrible day at work she had, and how that translates into scorn for her husband, then it's over. And she was doing it for years? Nope.

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It's not a matter of being macho or anything like that. The disrespect is just a symptom, not the cause, of a dying marriage. Everybody knows that. I've never seen a woman so beautiful that I'd allow her to shovel shit on my head, and certainly not for years. No way, and no doubt in my mind.

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I think you've been feminized Hooker. You should try hanging out with other people for a while. Whoever you're taking advice from is leading you down a path you don't need to travel. 2 stars for the candyass MC.

Good tale but I hate a trusting husband stabbed to late.

Yeah, marry an amoral career woman... that's a path to happiness - not.

Eat it BITCH !!!!!

Allmandinger? 🤣

Takes an overly patient man to make a good LW story most of the time. Given that, damn good story

Great story! I especially enjoyed the end where Reece realizes that Griff has found a loving family to enjoy, while she is growing old alone and unloved. Perfect.

Serve the bitch right

Good story. I think Griff should have acted earlier. He should have insisted on a Post-nup requiring yearly polygraph exams and a heavy penalty for adultery. Maybe Renee has finally figured it out that having no-strings sex with multiple men may be pleasurable for a small amount of time, but what about the rest of the time? They aren't there at home to help take care of all of a normal life's chores, they aren't there to take care of you when your sick, or feeling down, etc... All they want is sex. She may be rich, but her looks will fade and she won't have anyone to share it with. I hope she likes cats...

This is just poor pacing and unnecessary confusion for a silly twist. Reece wasn’t the beginning of when he met his wife.

Rounding up was a great line.

HeelGuy9800 wrote:

"Her narcissistic personality did her in. Husband could only put up with it so long, longer than I would have put up with it."

I agree 100% with that statement. She was totally narcissistic in her behavior and thinking. She was also self absorbed in herself to think she was queen, and everyone else was low hanging fruit. It kind of reminded me about the story "Let Go" about the wife who became CEO (without fucking her way to the top), and fires her top salesman husband. She only gets back with her husband after he left her and found a new job in purchasing for one of her biggest customers. If it hadn't been for the 2 kids they helped raise, they would have never gotten back together. In this case, she didn't want kids, and the blond bombshell did. That's why he married her, and took her to Hawaii for their 25th anniversary. Also why they were sharing pics of the grand baby around the table at the coffee shop at the end. He was living a life well. We don't know about her (never gets told in the story), maybe that top office keeps her warm at night being alone in it.

Sorry, while it was a decent read, it wasn't all that great of a read. Especially since she was cheating on him for years, and he never knew it (trusted her too much).

Not a fan of this one because the husband was so weak.

If he strongly suspected her of having an affair, why didn't he stick a PI on her and find out for sure?

Instead he has to live with his doubts about her obvious lies, and always wonder how far she went with the boss. How can any man live like that? And he puts up with her arrogance and disrespect for 20 years?! Fuck that!

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The story did have an important message though:

Never get married to a career woman. They make terrible wives, with totally borked priorities. The more senior they are, the shittier the spouse they'll be... And I'm not even talking about infidelity, of which she'll have many opportunities if there's business travel.

Dunno what that had to do with Percy's song. Still an okay story, D

Finally a macho blow hard @anom below who’s actually married. That’s a first, if true. And he brags about what his wife wouldn’t do, as if he knows. 🤪

No Traci??

I thought it was illegal in all states for Hooked1957 to write a cheating wife story where the wife was not named Traci!

Pretty good effort…along with two other stories. Keeping all that running through your head might have led you to miss “Reece literally tossed his wife on the bed.” Lots of “evil” women populate LW, but Reece has to be among the top ten. For me the story was more about Reece than Griff, exploring how a self-entitled person might think. Scary prospect to be married to a person like that.

The stresses of running a global business cause tensions in a person and sex is a massive pressure release. For the "old school" boys, its acceptable but not for women. You wrote this very well as far as her minimizing him. I've seen it in the business world hundreds of times and the excuses are all just lame.

Why did you start the story with Griff and Reece on a 25th anniversary, with kids and a happy marriage if that had never happened?

I loved how hooked kept us in suspense throughout the entire story. I kept wondering what Reese was going to do to win him back. 5 stars.

a dumbass that wasted over eight years on a whore. Stuck his head in the sand and believed a liar. No.....that is not going to make the self centered bitch continue once it blows over. He got lucky to be young enough to start over.

Once a cheater always a cheater, once a liar always a liar. Once a punk always a punk. No redeeming characters at all.

Griff’s mistake was the first confrontation. He should have hired a PI that same day, then bought himself time. A faked trip, some late nights, to avoid her while his PI gathered evidence.

I got derailed by "in his mind, he drifted back to the beginning..." I guess he must have been sitting with his second wife when he drifted back? Only Four for this one.

Reece proved she's a whore, thought she was too good, got knocked up and killed a baby.Nothing would be bad nough for that slut...

Cleverly done. I naturally believed Griff was reminiscing about his wife of 25 years on their anniversary cruise. Then Reece fucked her boss, John, and I’m now thinking Griff forgave her for her indiscretion. In the back of my mind I’m thinking he doesn’t know what she did. While the two are advancing in their respective fields I’m thinking Hooked1957 has erred with the timeframe as they need to get pregnant soon if their kids are gonna be in college for their 25th anniversary. They get older and still no kids. Then Reece gets preggy and aborts. How can Griff forgive Reece for aborting a child he always wanted. Finally I concluded Griff’s 25th anniversary was with another woman. Griff never knew about her abortion, or the extent of her cheating. Glad for Griff. Four stars.

Good story and real common problem. The traveling for work creates cheating with an attitude of not getting caught. Problem is it usually finds it to be an ego that is entitled and will always cheat thinking your smarter than everyone one else until caught

same old cliche

There are those of us that are more 'equal' than others. This meaning they think they are and because of there position as a CEO of a huge company, or a ports figure being paid millions to play a 'game' or even the reverance some peple show toward pur president and some elected officials. Most of thes people are living in that rarified atmosphere so far above the rest of us they lose site of the fact they are just people and they have to wipe their but just like us. It;s calle 'inflation of the soul'. This is all pointed out by our author in this story. The only advantage is if your rich you may not be able to buy happiness but you can sure as hell buy your own brand of misery.

Damn! She tupped her way out of a good marriage. Glad it all worked out for Griff, though. 5* story.

well the beginning was weird and getting to the end it still weird lol what happen there. maybe its a sign that yall should stop trying to write the ending in the beginning. it was ok after that weirdness but too short for what was happening. didnt get any real emotion from the hubby, fell flat

Nice story of one spouse thinking that they're all that, or the phrase "their shit doesn't stink," & think they can do whatever they want bec. their entitled to it somehow. As long as the other spouse doesn't know... which they always found out. My one thing with this story: he learned his wife's cheating on him & didn't hire a PI? "Coward", which the husband said he was, isn't strong enough. Spineless, weak, wimpish are better adjectives. It's not he couldn't afford it - IDK why he wouldn't want to know for sure & then handle things accordingly. Also, there's the sex diseased worms (hehe) that could be detrimental to one's health & even life. However, I liked the story overall... 4 stars. Bob

Why would he have continued to allow her to work for a CEO that she had an affair with? Initially she should have quit the job or been divorced. The fact that she continued to work there was absurd. Which led to her moving up more in the corporate ladder and that feeling of entitlement.

Why did he ever put up with it?

And the husband was very weak character, hiding from the facts and burying his head in the sand. Also not showing very much emotion. Kinda flat

Well at least you had the Griff character admit that he was a coward so we know why Reese had such a low opinion of him.

Couldn’t have happened to a more deserving woman…..

5stars

An empowered career woman... yay for her. Akso an amoral whore, an absolute cum-dumpster.

Do pussywhipped cuckold lastly got balls to divorce the slut

He described him accurately.... He was just a coward

Reece was a professional, in the oldest profession, not in real business. She fucked her way to the top, betraying her husband and killing her own child. She got off way too easy. Otherwise good story

So, I guess it’s true, women are the equals of men, equally self-centered, equally corrupt, equally self-deluding.