by oldtruckdriver
That turned out to be not what I expected. Excellent, fun read, well done.
All good until the ending. Any good producer would have ignored it all and told them to hide it all. He had a winning show and not like it destroyed by the truth. He might even tell her to see a surgeon he knows who can keep things secret, to get a sex change.
Loved it, yet again. Lovely sweet story; ending was a little rushed for me but still enjoyed it.
After years of reading slight twists on the same old, same old plots here is something original. Yeah, it has some flaws and a bit far out, but it was really fun reading. And Eddie was a fucking genius! 5*
Gave you a five even though it had “flaws”.
Nice twist though it was obvious even before Luke was noted to have poor upper body strength.
Sentence structure is pretty boring.
Maybe 4*.