All Comments on 'It's Not What You Think'

by oldtruckdriver

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TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago

A very cute story! Well written and fun to read. Thank you!

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 3 years ago

That turned out to be not what I expected. Excellent, fun read, well done.

DeLord12804DeLord12804over 3 years ago

Oh, that was nicely done... very sweet.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

All good until the ending. Any good producer would have ignored it all and told them to hide it all. He had a winning show and not like it destroyed by the truth. He might even tell her to see a surgeon he knows who can keep things secret, to get a sex change.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Great.

Loved it, yet again. Lovely sweet story; ending was a little rushed for me but still enjoyed it.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
Brilliant!

After years of reading slight twists on the same old, same old plots here is something original. Yeah, it has some flaws and a bit far out, but it was really fun reading. And Eddie was a fucking genius! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Overcritical is on a mellow streak.

Gave you a five even though it had “flaws”.

Nice twist though it was obvious even before Luke was noted to have poor upper body strength.

Sentence structure is pretty boring.

Maybe 4*.

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