by hardwayone
Thanks Randog025,
If only my mind could keep up with my typing. I hope to improve each time I write and comments like yours help.
THE END? I'M HOPING YOU CONTINUE AFTER IT JUST STARTED TO GET INTERESTING. WHEN I GOT TO THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY I HAD TO GO BACK AND START OVER BECAUSE I STILL DIDN'T KNOW JUST WHO WAS WHO. WAS RICHARD HIS FATHER IN LAW AND JOYCE HIS MOTHER IN LAW? WHERES HIS WIFE? I GOT SO CONFUSED. JUST TRYING TO HELP AFTER ALL I AM A RETIRED EDITOR.
A couple more pages including them fucking would have been a better read than leaving us hanging like that. This could get nice and hot though. Don't stop now