by Adrianaloves2doit
Marriage was de as d anyway I’m guessing. She should have just divorced him not the degrade herself to a piece of filth.
It's no wonder you stopped posting stories here given the number of deranged comments there are on this one.
The many flaming comments compelled me to give you a chance.
I mean, anything this unanimously despised just had to be worth a look, didn't it.
WOW, Anonymous (for they are legion) was right, sad and incomplete comes to mind.
I can see where you were trying to go but this was just badly executed.
Your characters were both hollow and paper thin.
Dialogue, stilted and not remotely believable.
In the words of Bart Simpson, "I wouldn't have believed it, but this both sucks and blows"
The drawing a line in the sand bit is something you do when you’re ready to go to war, not save your relationship.
She was no more ready to save her marriage than he was. She’s simply waaay more sanctimonious about it.
Ohhh wow.... This story would have you believe, the wife is the “ Mother Theresa” of cheating! How about the guys wife she cheated with . Did they get divorced, have kids? Most likely, she ruined two marriages. And I know, hers was already ruined, according to the story. And the best part, was hubby just deciding to spring on her, HE was cheating, too. Never woulda happened. One star.
Feminist horse hockey.
Cancel everything, and do not take steps,to,advance your career.
Fuck her and her spewage.
Why should she go,to,work to find fuck buddies, and thusly poison the workplace.
She ought to quit her day job and enjoy life as a whore…she now has the experience to qualify.
Fuck her!
Hypocritical, cheating, heartles cunt. I hope what you did comes back to you tenfold.
You could of had the high ground, shown that you are a reasonable, respectable, honorable woman deserving of love, affection, intimacy and respect.
You could of just divorced the loser and move on with your life and be sexually active however and with whomever you so chose, assuming every party's wishes are respected.
But no, you chose to show your true colors, the colors of a whore that give women a bad reputation. It's not the sex that did that, it's how you went about doing it, it'a your atitude, hypocrisy, entitlement and lack of any form of decency, respect for others and even selfrespect. You are among the worst of the worst, lowest of the low.
Man if true you are truly stupid. Why not just change the date of the date night. I could not even finish this crap
Normally no but this storyline did it right.
He had every chance and kept blowing it and then topping it off by having cheated
She did it right. He had opportunity to stop!!
And didn't for a basketball game? Wow what a man?! Not!!
Finally, a real story. They have been few and far between the last several days. Thanks for your effort.
What a shitty story of a slut wife ….the author just tried to paint frank with the infidelity brush to justify her MCs whoring…
Seriously can expect a female writer to only do that as most of them ahve no substance in their writings!!
Hate everyone in this story. Frank is a cheating asshole and the fact that this whore just made one phone call and she joined the ranks of pieces of shit cheaters shows that she had every intention of doing that regardless of what Frank did.
Just two assholes that NEED a DIVORCE!!! He is a whiney CUCK, and she is a SELFISH CHEATING SLUT!!!
Shes a piece of trash .. she already checked out of the marriage and is trying to act like she has the moral higher ground.. she doesn't. He's a but of an ass but s
Her sanctimonious hypocrisy.. yeah fuck Marge or whatever the real named person is .. tje hubby is a dipshit at best but her antics no sympathy for her at all
Worst publication I read in a long time no man would put up with those demands and if she had told any man that she would give her ass to someone else than her husband he would be in jail
And I know more than a few who would have seen to it that she did if she treated them like that.
another fucking bitch that doesn't care about marriage vows, wouldn't let her husband have one night before going off to fuck some guy. i, hope you get some many STD'S
since they both cheat. At least she came out and told him ahead of time and even said she wouldn't stop so if they both don't give a crap about each other they can coexist and have a miserable marriage.
Leave the marriage of you aren't happy. Get a divorce instead of being a cheating whore.
I would just blow your fucking head off along with your lovers. You piece of shit woman who thinks she deserves it all. Just fuck you.
Fun stories to read, but definitely not fun to live.
No female ever has any problem finding guy to fill the hole when she spreads her legs.
So don't go thinking you are something special!
Hell, you have informed world you love2doit
Why can't date night be on a non basketball game night! Dumb!
Also there won't be 7 home games in a row.
She had already decided before she ever gave him the course of her direction she left the marriage long before he had she is just looking to feel her need for attention and wanted to be in charge of him bad moral ettics on her part typical cuckold fantasy He is no better he should have been happy to get away from her as he never was there either
file for divorce if you want to get his attention. Follow through if you must.
Problem is now you are a cheating slut. Probably would have forwarded your helpfully provided picture to everyone you know.
I loved part of this story, I cracked up at the Idea of sending Frank a picture of you sucking somebody else. other than that I felt things moved to quickly from cheating on your husband to getting a divorce. if? that had really been your first time with somebody else. You never mentioned what you had been doing to preserve your marriage other than whining because Frank wasn't taking you out once a week. It just seemed that regardless of what Frank decided the divorce was going to happen, don't try to blame his cheating on your decision for divorcing him. your mind seemed to have been made already even before you knew of his cheating. like I said, things went to quick from when you warned him to when you actually did it. Just doesn't add up sleeping with someone on a first date. but its just a story, I liked your story just thought I could throw a few pointers, I'm in my late sixties and there are only one type of girls I have known that sleep with a man on a first date, much less spend the night with him, and you don't present yourself as one of those. that is unless it had become a habit of yours of sleeping around before you warned Frank about the divorce. Then I would agree with you. This marriage had been over a long time before you told Frank of your intentions.
she didn't know about his cheating so no excuse. Just a better reason for him to move on.
for the picture proof of your infidelity. I'll be at the lawyers first thing Monday morning. Before you come home tomorrow the locks will be changed, your crap will be off the lawn thanks to the internet and our photo albums will be burned. Adios bitch.
Get the divorce, it's what she wanted in the first place...or better yet, leave the cheating bitch with nothing. Take all the money, close all credit cards, stop all utilities, drop her from your insurance, quit your job and disappear. Let her survive without you.
You´re to familiar with Ryan and to comfortable to have me believe this was the first time with him. According to you this is the result of his breaking date night. As if there is only one night you can have sex. Have you thought that maybe he didn´t want to wait for once a week thats why he saw other girls? I did some cheating on my wife myself But it was cause we only had sex when she felt like it, which was like every two to three weeks. When I got tired of waiting, I decided to join a bowling team with my friends, thats when she claimed to be lonely cause I was out a lot of times. My late wife wasn´t a whore so she didn´t go fuck somebody and then made an excuse. But I don´t believe this was your first adventure With someone.This was just used as an excuse to justify you divorce and cheating. If your kids read this I´m sure they will see right through the deception unless they´re really as stupid as you´re trying to make us be. And by reading the posts here I can see I´m not the only one that believes you´re lieing.
If it's really your story . You're a self centered selfish B.... and thank god you're divorced now, but i'm sure you cant find a stupid man to marry you again
How did her family and friends treat her? And since he was prepared she came out of the divorce with not much of anything. She lost. Big time.
"I understand what you did, I don't like it, but to be fair, you gave me the choice. I just didn't believe you." LOL, of course, just like Adriana understands why he calls an escort after seven headaches.
this story belongs in the category. about average prose. the protagonist is a very sad example of humanity.
Sure, he's cheated, but you send him a picture with another man's cock in your mouth before you even know about the cheating. Then you take that same man to your marital bet, again before you know about his cheating. Despite such utter disrespect, he offers to reconcile, admitting his indiscretions, and you're offended? You've humiliated him indescribably, and you're unforgivibly hurt. Sorry, she's so selfish that it would be hard to believe that she hasn't always been so about things other than sex during the marriage, and neither character is in the least bit likeable, her even less so.
and maybe the husband had enough of her Cunt ways and was fucking some tight young pussy and didn't care what this heartless Cunt did. He is better off getting divorced and getting away from her cheating lying Cunt. As they say "Good riddance to bad rubbish" oh and happy this Cunt isn't writing any more. at least under this fake name.
Wife was a cunt. Husband was a jerk and had no idea how to "be married".
So after 2 kids and 20 years she just ups and cuckolds her husband saying "your fault".
Hey darling..... Wear stockings tonight.
Can't, I've a headache and be no pair without a ladder
Ok, I'll just go fuck the next door neighbour.
Yeah that works too.
Thank god she stopped writing.
Actually, a fairly good story theme. However, it's pretty extreme to not only go on the date, but to screw and blow the guy, and spend the night. Titillating, but a little more meat would have been added if she had only gone that far on the second date, and then have been caught in flagrant dilecto the second night when the husband returned early. You could then have the story go several different directions. It would appear that she always loved herself much more than anyone else all through the marriage going by the epilogue at the end.
Was it extreme? Yes. Should she have screwed someone else in that way? No. Serve him with separation papers and if no changes, divorce papers in the next couple of weeks. At that point do what you want, but until then she is still married and have a responsibility to the marriage.
It underlines the fact that two wrongs do not make a right. It would seem that a lack of communication was at the heart of their problem. And then it went nuclear. Oh well another one bites the dust!
And we thought the muslems had a lot of men who would enslave wives. Look at the rage and hate towards women spilled by some of these commenters!
The marriage was pretty nearly dead, she had been trying for a long time to reserect it, wanted some sign of commitment from him before she pulled the plug. A night of mind blowing sex showed her just how much she had been missing. Frank at his best wasn't close to this.
You only go through life once, only a fool would choose a life of misery.
She cheated on him without knowing about him cheating, I'm fact she actively cuckolded him. "Cancel your plans and be with me" is not how marriage works. It's about compromise. Neither party in this story is a good individual. But it's it till the last minute that we find out about frank. The wife is straight up cheating/cuckolding him, with no sense of regret whatsoever.
I hate cheaters, male or female. There are no excuses for cheating. I was in the husband's corner up until he admitted he was a cheater too. I just don't understand why people think that cheating can save a marriage. If the marriage is dead or dying, both partners have 2 choices - either both work on it to try and save it or divorce and end it - without the cheating. Thanks for writing an interesting story.
Frank, what a fucking asshole!!! And a cheater!!! He deserves what he got!!!
And still anons want to burn the bitch? WTF?!? What is wrong with you idiots?
So she stayed faithful to this cheater for far too long.
His neglect of her exposed his cheating.
Now he deserves to get screwed out of every penny she can get in the divorce.
Bled dry?
We can hope.
Burn is for the cheater which ever one.
Once he cheated what she did was not cheating.
The marriage contract was broken, no longer binding on her.
Yes someone needs burned.
Frank needs burned!
Frank was cheating and ignoring his wife because his needs/desires were taken care of elsewhere.
She finally realized the marriage was over, even if the paperwork had not been filed.
Frank broke their vows, Frank broke their contract to be faithful.
Frank broke their agreement to always have a weekly date night so that he could have sex with other women.
Adriana was not the cheater.
Frank was.
But she's worse. Go ahead go against your better sense. End up alone and disease ridden. That's the ticket.
ALL INGREDIENTS FOR A CRAP STORY, 1*
I know you're a skinny bi female but I just hope that all the females reading this shit think hard about the double stds here. What would the reaction be if this was the other way round with the guy doing the cheating.... whoa. I bet they'd want to string him up & cut his balls off, well bit hard to cut balls off this cheating bitch so why not just.........!. *2 as the writing wasn't too bad
Your behavior and lack of remorse shows that you are as self-destructive, delusional and callous as monsters like Osama bin Laden. You and your kind always find reasons to justify your selfish behaviour . You place sexual gratification above love and family. Do you not see where this kind of attitude leads to ? An empty life devoid of meaning ! A life guided only by selfish impulse to satisfy lust. And the sorry fact is that most women are like you. That scares the f**k out of me !
Your behavior and lack of remorse shows that you are as self-destructive, delusional and callous as monsters like Osama bin Laden. You and your kind always find reasons to justify your selfish behaviour . You place sexual gratification above love and family. Do you not see where this kind of attitude leads to ? An empty life devoid of meaning ! A life guided only by selfish impulse to satisfy lust. And the sorry fact is that most women are like you. That scares the f**k out of me !
She had already argued vehemently about the decline in their relationship. The seven missed date nights in a row was just the final straw after years of neglect.
She laid it on the line and he gave it up for a basketball game? A fucking seminar? I don't think so. If my wife came to me with those concerns I would drop everything to make it right. That told her the marriage was over in everything but the paperwork.
Ergo, she was free to pursue other interests.
After all those years of marriage, the wife decided to take action rather than LOUDLY talking to her husband after the 2nd broken date? And the husband was REALLY cheating on her? Too bad, so sad. Now they get to split up their marriage, divide everything and not enjoy there retirement years because their money got split and the house got sold. Just another idiotic pair of cheaters.
I'm an equal opportunity hater. All cheaters suck. He was sneaky and she was blatant. Both should live in extreme pain.
Well done!! You crafted the most believable Skank wife in this section! Proof positive that if women don't get their way they simply spread their legs. The men in India have this solved.... A cup of kerosine and a lit match POOF kitchen accident!! Bye bye wifey :):):)
When I finished this one, the first similar story was "Wife Jams Cucumber Up My Ass". Exactly how I felt about this story.
I love the idiotic comments.
The story is about a dead marriage. What do you do when you wake up with a corpse?
1. feel for a pulse (date night with or without you)
2. try cpr (giving away my virgin asshole to someone tonight, will it be you?)
She's not a whore, not even a slut. Maybe she was a bad wife, we don't know. What we do know is she woke up to the fact that she was in a dead marriage and she extricated herself from it.
Grow up, crybabies, she did nothing wrong, she just decided not to continue to embrace a corpse.
...are too stupid to be allowed to reproduce.
An extremely cold and uncaring woman, if that upset the thing to do was divorce first.
It was rather obvious from the outset neither one really was concerned about the other, anyway, and the wife only cared about herself.
I would have divorced the wife, the "Ryan" character might not have survived.
Rowan who give admitted cuckolds like huecuck a bad name. Come on out cucky, staying in the closet multiplies your shame because everyone is laughing behind your back.
I don't use the word at all but it aptly describes you ( this is autobiographical by your own words). You are nothing but a cheating cunt who gave no attempt at salvaging your marriage. No, you just felt you should destroy a man. It's cunts like you who give women a bad name.
Rowan.
the wife is a slut plain and simple, and the husband had the good since to move the fuck on. She'll be a 60 years bitch living alone wondering what happened to her life. He'll met some 35 year old chick and move on.
you were done with the marriage before dropping the ultimatum. If you were really serious about saving it, you would not have had sex with Ryan on the first night. You might have gone out with him, but I doubt you would have had sex with him that first night. So... you got what you wanted.
I'm not saying that what you wanted was wrong. I'm saying your comments about wanting to save the marriage were not necessarily true.
Dr slapped his behind, said you're gonna be special... cuck tale so WBC got to spooge over her affair with Ryan, like most WBC the hubby wanted her to have other men so he got what he wanted, everyone wins
except the goose is in control. For most the female winning is alien to them, however, double standards should apply fairly and evenly. TK U MLJ LV NV
the slut just wanted to fuck strange cock and take it up her poopchute. way to go slut!!
It's writers like this that make a lady cringe. On behalf of the female of the species I would like to take this moment to apologise regarding this author Adriana. Not all of us are selfish cunts.
She cuckolds him, cheats on him and then decides the marriage is over. A lonely lonely whore. I hope the husband finds a nice woman to take care of him an who will make sure he gets checked for STDs from that filth ridden gutterslut he was married to.
1 star. Rubbish.
But, honestly, while I understand the woman's point of view in this (and that is a rare thing for me, indeed...) she should have just divorced him so she could at least take the high road. Her cheating did not help her case.
You are all anonymous here. Come forward with at least your e mail adresses.
This story is worth six or seven stars, but I could only find a way to give it five stars.
It was not only a story, it was about a BIG probleme for a lot of wifes, you shit heads.
Adrianaloves2doit, hopefully we will se a new story soon, I'm waiting.
Stupid pair of twits - as for the wifey what a piss poor job you did of excusing the slut's behaviour. The pair of dumbasses make loving wives blush. All in all crap story with boring same ole theme
Deserves than a 1 star. Hopefully the author restrains from further efforts of penmanship. Too sick. Obviously needs medical intervention.ead
Didn't like it much cause I'm a man, he broke a date, you broke your marriage vows, don't like anybody in this story, turn off.
That was what this account and most of the woman's stories are about.
First was the hubby wrong yes he was and if you had caught and divorced him I would have said you did the right thing!
However you decided just because he had broken seven "date nights" you would break your marriage vows. That is a little extreme don't you think?
If you had truly wanted to save your marriage you would have given him the time to work it out and not a ultimatum.
I have read two of your other stories so far and like your writing and really thought there was finally a author on here that got the importance of the wedding vows, However seeing as this really happened I would have to say you are no different than the masses of other women out there.
Your marriage meant nothing or you would have not gone out and fucked some random dude.
Again if you had caught him you would have had every right to end the marriage,two wrongs do not make a right!!!!!!
Betcha when she hits menopause it'll be perfectly OK to cut her guy off without expecting any consequences though. Women generally all think their twats are gold plated and the sun rises and sets on it.
It only leads to greater problems. This marriage was over a long time ago and she should of just left him. If she had she'd have kept the moral high ground. Now she just proved she's just as bad a person as he was.
She appear to be happy on the surface until she realizes what she lost and the consequences for her decision. The story was realistic enough, but the result was tragic.
It is quite obvious to me that the wife had quit loving her husband and her marriage long before she carried out her ultimatum! The way I read it, she wanted her husband to reject her ultimatum so that she could rationalize her cheating immediately. And no...this is not a "Loving Wife" story! It belongs somewhere else in literotica... I think you further had him admit to cheating so as to help rationalize her actions! I had a cheating wife and she never was brazen enough to announce her cheating in advance. She truly wanted to keep me as her husband and have her extramarital sex as well... She never gave me her reasons other than that I was out of State a lot with my job. The only reason ever for cheating is because one spouse or the other "Wants" to! I don't believe that you think this wife was justified. This is more a fantasy with justification made up in your mind...
So cheating is a proper way to deal with him breaking these dates? That's insane. If she was not happy she should get a divorce then go fuck whoever she wants.
<br>Writer, I pretty much disliked your story, however I think you do write well. Normally, this would have gotten your story a 50, but I will give your story a 100 because you helped me to see what Ohio is.</br>
<br>I have read Ohio's stories and I could never make up my mind about Ohio. However, Ohio's many recent posts on other writers' stories have finally confirmed to me that Ohio was a "cheater".</br>
<br>I may be wrong, but I doubt it.</br>
<br>So, I thank you author.</br>
but I didn't find it all that unrealistic. On the one hand, the wife's behavior was drastic. But the author makes clear how many previous warning she had given her husband--I mean, your wife warns you that if you go to the basketball game you're risking your marriage, and then you go anyway??? The husband was clearly a moron. Hard to feel much sympathy for him. Thanks, ohio
The plot was rushed, insufficiently developed and the twist at the end was far too obvious. Take your time and avoid the cliched story-lines.
"God has a very big heart, but there is one sin he will not forgive: if a woman calls a man to her bed and he will not go."
The writer made him not believe her so she caused the slut to whore in an already planned way.<P>
And so she cast herself in the calculating negative in anyone's realistic viewpoint.<P>
Had she delivered a divorce decree he would have taken her seriously but that wasn't what the writer wanted.<P>
She wanted a braindead male to be humiliated by his long term stupidity from her keyboard decisions to fuck up the marriage as a position of female superiority to embarrass the dumbo she created.<P>
How un-novel and predicktable from a self serving premeditated position.<P>
Talent astray & wasted on non-sense.
It seems that the women agree with the wife and most of the men agree with the husband. I found the comment about marriage interesting. Why do we need marriage anyway? Just to keep the church; lawyers and record keepers in business. She cheats and feels no remorse and has no qualm of throwing it in his face. He admits to an infidelity and it's cut the balls off time. Really good thing women are so understanding of us lowly no-good men to allow us to live in your world. So as I said why have marriage? Oh yes I remember now it's to keep the little woman warm and clothed and fed.
Yes - I say he wanted to have a cleaning lady and she wanted him to act like a husband should and now they both get to do things that make them both happy,! Very goood story and a great finish and only guys who run around on there wives would not like it. Thanks.
Obviously, the marriage had stailed a little over the years and then the cancelling out on dates, 7X...too much. I'm a guy, a conscientous guy, and I can relate to the disappointment, hurt and lonliness of being let down. Woman have needs too and I suspect, maybe subconsciously, she had been wanting to have some affection, loving or even just cuddling, so...frustation, hurt and anger and a sudden outburst insisting on 'show me you care' which probably could have been satisfied with a hug, nice kiss, apologies and a promise to spend all the next day shopping, dinner, etc...would have sufficed; however, indecision is a decision and recognizing this, feeling this, sensing this she unconsciously and quickly moved to a threat. One thing I know, a woman scorned, you better listen!!! Once she unfolded her proposal, there would be no going back, she would, any real woman would, stick to her demand and...possibly, or quite likely, hope the husband would think quickly and show some caring and definite determination to rekindle his/her love. Too bad, his hesitation was her final. Most intelligent woman I know...they're gone, too bad, you asked for it and you, in a womans mind, pushed her away and into it. What surprised me is that she actually gave him a second chance, of course - she hung around as long as she did, maybe a renewed love was worth it, but not for long.
I say cudo's, you wrote the story well! I have no sympathy for this asshole and yes, I've met guys just like him and feel sorry for their wives.
PS: I am not gay, have a great admiration and respect for women and think true loving relationships are out there and those couples are blessed!
Good writing.
OK so frank has been very neglectful. Marriage takes WORK and effort and committment. We all know that. So the wife has not had sex is several weeks.
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That IS a problem. The sex is symbolic or an expression of the effort Frank is NOT putting into the marriage.
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But reverse this story for a second. We all know that there are far more numerous cases where the wife loses interest in the sex. It might be menopausal. Or maybe she is bone weary tired coming home from work and making dinner and looking after the kids...etc
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Fair enough. But suppose the husband says "well wife if you dont want sex & you wont spend together time this evening ... then I will go out and fuck wommen...
possibly several different women..".
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How would you all react to THAT !? does the husband actions STILL sound reasonable?
Supposedly this is a TRUE story. Sure and there were LOTS of WMDS in iraq in 2003. Of course at the end Frank just HAD to confwss that he too had been cheating right?
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Just pathetic.
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Why did it Have to be the case Frank was cheating?
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because Frank going to a basketball game or two...does not justify spending 12 hours + with another man and MOST of 12 hrs... fucking him.