All Comments on 'I've Taken a Lover'

by RonMurphy

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
Not bad

Your story is not bad. It could use a touch more excitement and we'd like to know about Gary's wife (is she ok with this, does she just ignore his "man time", are they just living a friendly marriage, is there a chance for Gary and Ron to become a serious romance?) 5 years is a long time for an affair. We're ready for another chapter and some serious loving to go on.

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAabout 4 years ago
Man I feel you; good read.

I was seeing (2) guys ~ nothing serious. One was married then got divorced and acquired a live in girlfriend (unfortunately things have fizzled out).

The other one has a live in girlfriend so I barely see him. Sad situation.

63lsmith63lsmithabout 4 years ago
NICE

A bit lacking in details and the sex parts to short. Still a nice read.

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