All Comments on 'Ivy's Aphrodisiac'

by SecretEssence

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I am pretty sure I have read this story before!

Did you rewrite this story or something...cause this story seems very familiar

ghscrubbiesghscrubbiesover 15 years ago
Read it also!

Did you change your name or did you post this story on another board? If not, this is not your story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It Is A Repeat

This chapter was presented as the first 2 chapters plus the first 2 paragraphs of the third chapter of a story with the same title...author was Tigerseye. First chapter was published on Lit on 1/08/08. Is a cute story.

SecretEssenceSecretEssenceover 15 years agoAuthor
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Hi everyone,

Yes you have read this before, and it is mine. I had to change my name and I thought I deleted the Tigerseye9302 account. Sorry for the confussion. I have posted more stories at Storiesonline under the name of SecretEssence, so visit me there if you would like to read more. And thanks for looking out for my stories.

~SecretEssence

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story.... some attention needed

to the grammar. You appear to be mixing your present and past tenses, often within the same sentence.

This confuses the poor reader, so have a heart, eh? :o)

The storyline is very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More please

This is an excellent beginning to a series

ScifiantScifiantover 12 years ago
Plagiarism!!

This is blatant plagiarism of Tigerseyes9302 series of the same name!!! There was not even an attemp to make anything different!!!

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