by Lovenude
I loved that Izzy got completely nude, from head to toe, in public. Hopefully Izzy’s movie theater (mis)adventure results in her removing her sneakers and socks and she ends up just as totally bare-assed naked.
I don't blame her for keeping the shoes on in the theatre... The floor there is usually sticky with spilled drinks and candy. But I agree she needs to remove them too.
Loved this. Read it several times. Reminds me of growing up. Please writeore of this type.
Good story.
On a bike, you pedal, not peddle. Peddling is selling stuff, pedaling is propelling a bike. A salesman going door to door is a peddler; a cyclist trying to get uphill is a pedaler.
Little mistakes don't interfere with the building tension of the story. I just thought you'd want to know.
There must have been a really popular TV show on that night, to have the park and the roads all be empty. I bet she could have pedaled past a number of pedestrians without anyone realizing she was naked, or only noticing after she had passed.