All Comments on 'J vs J'

You lead your readers up to the heart of the story and then it's just like wham bam thank you mam, end of story. A little more detail in the heart of this would have made it a great story and maybe some detail about what happened after he says "I knew you were mine".

But, overall, a great first post!!!

Very well written sugartank. The forcefullness works.....and her wet pussy gives it away!