All Comments on 'Jaci Stone - Act 03'

I'm willing to give the next part a chance but the ending here just left me feeling...very upset, especially when you start to care about the characters in it. for such a long story that I've spent many hours reading I honestly would have preferred a 3rd rewind to what m.night shamilan twists is going on here. the story sometimes feels extremely random like it is being planned as it's written. It's unfortunate because I really liked this story and the characters in it, and the ending kind of feels like a disservice to them.

I assume this wasnt the end, buts been a while still look forward to more

To anyone who may read this: The ending of this story is continued in 'Johan Birch'

Aaaaaahhhh!

ok i know this was written years ago. Love this and i am now very sad. Thank you Mindwiper for letting us know the name had changed for the series. I have yet to find a story like this that pulled me in so much. Excellent work