All Comments on 'Jack and Christine'

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fumunda cheezefumunda cheezeabout 18 years ago
very hot, very erotic

Both of them sensed that they had to stop. Both of them secretly knew that their time together was very limited.

Now, what I do not understand was the fact that if they both were in love, had no children, what was the problem that they could not divorce and marry. It was evident that neither of the pair really had much affection for their respective spouses. Why so importand they remain married. Maybe i missed something in the plot. Perhaps it was just the storyline of the excitement of cheating. A story like this one with an unmarried couple would just be ho-hum but this one was titilating for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very realistic

Great story Mark. Came across as very realistic. I could believe this may have happened. I liked the build up and teasing by Christine. It makes a change to read a story based in the UK

I look forward to reading your other stories

Sam Wood

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