All Comments on 'Jack and Jackie'

by jsmangis

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prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
No dinners at Steak & Shake? Great start.

Loved the history of each person. This will set up a tender and erotic series.

Fantastic job of research on the camera equipment. So real.

letsee101letsee101over 5 years ago
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Congratulations on this nice little tale. You wove a fine story around a loving couple that went thru heartache and heartbreak, then Jack found another true soulmate.

I believe you covered all emotions in one story and I don't think anymore could be added that could embellish this one. Thank you for a good read.

don52dee60don52dee6022 days ago

Great story. Want to read more.

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