All Comments on 'Jack & Jill Ch. 04'

I love your story development, and the sex is hot. but do wish you would break up some of your LONG paragraphs! Just meke the story so much easier to read.

loved it fucking and beening watched is a turn on wished i could have been there.

what a wonderful story hopefully the kids get to live together at collage it would have been nice if the parents found out but i was disapointed that you never described how jill revealed her new image to her parents i missed thier reaction it would have been nice

This one one of my favorite stories I've read on here. I especially enjoy how your story wasn't just sex, but building up to it.

I know it's just a story but the pool party where the incestuous triad reveal their secret to one old friend and three total strangers (that know exactly who they are and where they live) was completely unrealistic.

Fortunately you didn't fall all the way into the trend to have everyone fucking everyone that a lot of authors seem to tumble into because of a lack of imagination. If you continue this series I suggest ignoring this poorly thought out plotline and focus on the relationship between Jack, Jill, and Amy.

Very hot, as were both sisters.

Really enjoyed the whole story !

Fantastic story I just loved reading this and hope you write more