All Comments on 'Jack and Jill Pt. 03: Anna'

Apologies it is part of a longer chain story and I published it in the wrong category by mistake.

unfortunately, you'll get crushed for putting it here, whether she loves him and it's consensual.

It was a couple of separate paragraphs. One that belonged in Lesbian, one that belonged in Fetish. Mistress? Really? This was poorly thought out drivel. Never continue.

1 star ONLY because negative stars aren't yet available.

Definitely out of place here. Not a lot of LW readers imagine themselves gangbanged by a bunch of black guys. Props to the rate author who acknowledges that his story is misplaced.

Many errors. This story needs an editor. This segment seems to have been quickly written and posted. Lots of action, but no real plot.