by Ahabscribe
I loved how it starts out lovely and heats up all the way through....the couple sounds almost identical to my wife and I.
I can't wait to read more and see if they adopt her.
42DDs on a petite college student?! Come on, the ridiculousness of that is a turn off, even in fantasy. Make them 38D and you'll be on the border of reality.
Next chapter, Molly visits their home, then the newly married couple. If it hits you to add more cool, but I can see how this too was a good ending for a short rub it jerk it story.
But as I add to most authors, some of us like women with smaller breasts or average.
Every girl has bigger-than-life tits, and every boy has an enormous cock.
Story line is not believable either.
The story felt a little rushed, but other than that it was pretty good. I've known a couple of Mollys over the years. They weren't College girls but still they were working the night desk at the motels that I was staying in. Never got to share them with anyone but it was still a good time!