All Comments on 'Jack and The Fat Man'

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JP0920JP09203 months ago

Intriguing and hot story so far, love the contrast between Jack and Arnold. I definitely want to read more

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Got me so hard, anxiously awaiting the next part, thank you!!

scargazerscargazer3 months ago

Please continue!

parmesan888parmesan8883 months ago

nice story, only thing that i dont like much that jackie is such an odd-looking fellow that i struggle to identify myself with him, but that could just be me

RainbroheartRainbroheart3 months ago

Waiting for what's next

OralSubRayOralSubRay3 months ago

Yes please give us more, I want to please Arnold. Oops, I want Jack to please Arnold.

Cocksucker666Cocksucker66628 days ago

I want to be Jack!

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