All Comments on 'Jack Be Quick Ch. 02'

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MastersWench over 9 years ago

Gripping

I am really enjoying this story so much so far. It has me in its grip! Looking forward to more!

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bruce22 over 9 years ago

This story could go on for a long time.

Have you thought of writing a novel with this structure. I t would take a lot of research and creativity.

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