All Comments on 'Jack Frost Works at the Mall?'

Thank You for sharing such a fun little Christmas tale!!!

A truly wonderful Christmas story. I loved it. Romantic eroticism at it's very best!

GOOD STORY!!!! THIS ONE SHOULD WIN!!!!

How do i vote this is the best by far like I'm watching a romantic cheesy film but with a kinky twist.

One can only hope for more stories from this excellent author

Great story. Just complicated enough to be interesting. Lots of sex and even some kink. Basically perfect

Sweet and very sexy story that was a lot of fun. I laughed when they got trapped in the mall (and my first though was “please, no Christmas zombies!”) and when Jack accidentally destroyed the Christmas village. Great job all around! 5*

Well written love story. Very enjoyable read.

So cute!! Such an adorable love story (and really sexy too!), great job!! :)

An added twist I liked, courtesy of my own undercaffeinated brain: at first, I read "Twinkles" as "Twinkies." However I did read it, you keep doing you, and I'll keep reading.

Great Story...5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟...

Brilliant! 6 Stars!

Wonderful story, especially the banter and the ring

even insufferably, CUTE.

Hallmark and pornhub should team up to make this a holiday movie!

My fantasy of fucking Tinkerbell just got pushed aside in favour of Twinkles with candy striped stockings...

I can see her bent over that couch, her pretty red panties snug against her pussy, such a naughty elf. Loved this story. 5 stars plus.

This was amazing. Thank you.