All Comments on 'Jack Johnson - Montana Wilderness'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Loved the story keep it going... not offten you can find one of these that can make a person smile and laugh and still make the old pole go up :-)

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
You write a great story.

I loved the slow buildup that purposely or not threw in a few twists that made it different. Good job and you left it wide open so please try to continue. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
The Best

I have read alot of stories on here - but none of them compare to your work of art and the way the story was put together with it all ending the way that it did,I'm sure this has made everybody very happy both with a smile and a hard on to boot. Seems like you could (and I know all do) make three or four to follow up on this being in the wild and wonderful life in the country maybe even with a live in girlfriend she has met in town or along that line !! Can't really see a boyfriend in the picture though. Oh well - you are the writer and I will leave that up to you. Please keep them going for us. Thank You JAG

sunnyboy1203sunnyboy1203over 16 years ago
well done

Great story,screams for a next edition,lets see where you can take this.

Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fun

Jacking off into your adult daughter's mouth would be a lot of fun. It's fun to think about too. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Off the beaten track

It's nice to have something different to read and enjoyable as well . Do you plan to do a part 2 or would it just be more of the same ?

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
A Little Strange....But Fun.

Thanks for an interesting tale. Montana is a great place, isn't it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Ok interesting story dad is a prick tho. She is a teenager and he has an attitude about her not caring for the fact that he has no running water and an outhouse? Plus he already stated that he didnt have the best relationship with her so instead of making her comfortable he decides to buy the shitbox of a cabin to secure his future with money left for his daughter no wonder his ex left him !he is a stingy dead beat bastard!

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sover 5 years ago
Hailey the ho

Good job of dad being ok with daughter being a whore and Denton banging his ex but also breaking in his daughter too. Apparently he is ok with sharing his daughter with arlin also. Sorry but lost all interest in this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Jeebus, you need a person to proofread yer stories before you post. Multiple misspellings, and “interstate 200”? Maybe US Hwy 200..

Too, MIA is at least 2500 goddam miles away to the SSE from effing MSO. It’s no 15 minute drive.

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