All Comments on 'Jack Struggles in his Y Fronts'

Thanks for this addition. The public masturbation/spanking sequence was wonderful! It was a long wait for this chapter but well worth it. My only regret was that there was, I’m not complaining, no humiliation for Jack from Julia. She never even got to see him totally naked. Thanks again for more great erotic writing. lol……I lost so much pre cum reading this I feel dehydrated!

Another great chapter to this series. I love the way you create a believable rendition of the fifties through plot, colorful detail and precise word choices and phrasing. And then we find ourselves in your preposterous fantasy, in the hands of your engaging characters who prolly could spin off in side stories of their own. The embarrassment and humiliation is palpable. Waiting for chap four.

Excellent as always - please don't make us wait so long for the next installment.

Would love to read more about this school in the Carribean!

My congratulations for your stories. My message has to do with the series with Rodney. I would love to read a story about a party where Rodney is the guest and ladies like Mrs flint winch,, Dianne manners Tina Grey and Mrs Hardcastle are invited in Mrs Sarah Maitland for an unforgettable night with the boy. The only difference is that the ladies are dressed extremely sexy wearing high heels, no pants, they show their cleveage and micromini skirts with aim to help Rodney to get a hard on instantly. With regards.Spyros

Seems every part of this story is about slack white underpants. Its just not massively sexy. The Rodney series was just so amazing and had unlimited potential with the school aspect. I think its a shame the author has chosen this new story over continuing that amazing series but of course its your time and freedom to write. I will keep reading!

Excellent story. Very very good written. I hope to read much more chapters about the humiliation for Jack and the other boys!

Wonderful as always. To have a whole society of Women dedicated to humiliating and spanking and seeing males in the nuddie is electrifying. And the attention to 50's detail. Its comforting to think that that generation raised so many submissive boys and dominant Girls. That Women circumscribed in so many ways by their time could give full reign to their passions in a mutually supportive manner.

There is a whole galaxy of individuals and its nice to see such a cohesive vision.

I disagree with some points of the story even if it is as usual pretty funny.

I would not have written that one of the son accompanied by the moms to be punished in a better way by the experienced middle aged woman was already 28 age old, it is too much, I cannot believe at that situation, a man of that age would have not obeyto his mother like if he was still a ladd, to make it at least a bit credible, the boys must be not older than 20 or 21 age, a little like the legal age at that time.

Same for their attitude towards their sisters or cousinsn they must be still immature, still living at the house of their mother abnnd depending on her , not working or apprentice, not considered as adult, not having already called for military service ( I presume that thre was still one in the 50's in England ?) with no girlfriends nor sex affairs.

A young man of 28 age does not enter in that pattern for a story!

And even if I laugh when reading it, it seems to me that the girls -sisters and cousins - are a little too trampy, I have notice how some of them walking by in the corridor while boys are standing stark naked exposing their naked buttocks are really so trampy that they benefit from the nudity of the boys in the corridor to touch with their hands the curves of their bottom by back or even more trampy to slide the palms of their hands into the cleft of their buttocks and holding them in it like to take temperature or sliding in their crack or to pinch the bum of an other boy.

of course it was very tempting for girls when a cute male buttock is exposed to their view but they are too young to be so trampy!

Even if after they will give to boys strong slaps in the punishment room, It is not the same !

I would have more understood if a mother had slided her fingers in the cleft of the butt of a boy in the corridor !

Besides, I think that the boys after undressing might have been left standing stark naked exposed by back face to the wall of the first room to let all mothers and girls look at their butts during a long time, so that they would compare them and study visually each inch of their buttocks.

It would be wild if this series get another installment. Jacks mom visits Gerdas while Jack is there getting spanked. Has to show his mom the dirty pictures he looks at in front of the other ladies. They all discuss him and his habits like he is a pet altogether.