All Comments on 'Jackie’s Smile'

by JuncoPartner07

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
Bullrider14Bullrider14almost 3 years ago

I hope u keep this story line going. Very hot and intense

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Incredible language and pacing, you have real talent. Thank you.

JuncoPartner07JuncoPartner07almost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you both for the encouraging comments! When inspiration strikes again, so will I.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This really is some terrific writing. I would love to see more of these two, but this wraps up rather nicely on it's own.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous