by dawoolef
It was well written and hot except for the end. Please tell me that wasn't her son.
It wasn't bad, but the incest at the end meant it should've been in that category not erotic couplings. Minus stars for that.
She seemed to go along with his seduction for no good reason at all. She didn't even seem to be swept along by lust. Just a sort of an oh, why not then. Not a very erotic lead in to the sex.
I never would have read it. I won't vote on it and feel that other of your stories are much much better.