by Dreming_Alice_
Another great chapter. Please keep them coming. I love the dress code in class and would love to see more of that. I would love a reading of the rules this far as a reminder to Jackie as well as me the reader. Thank you for your sharing your talent. Pappasleaze!
Another great addition, thank you for your work! This chapter would have been aided by some more proof reading/editing. Getting another set of eyes on it before publishing might be worthwhile
Oh my, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Perhaps it would be more accurate to say I devoured each chapter. I read them eagerly and rapidly, but I am certain I did not miss any detail. Your writing kept me engaged. There were no glaring grammatical errors to pull me away. The series of ever expanding rules leading to further submission and possible exposure was very well done. There was no heavy handed or mean dominance. Well done. I hope you choose to continue to write and submit more storylines. Thank you!
This story just better better and better. One thing though, please please please keep this a girl only thing there are so very few really good ones on this site
I really don't like how you keep saying "the other girl" it's confusing. Just say the name of the girl.