All Comments on 'Jackpot'

by Ann Douglas

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Crusader235Crusader235over 6 years ago
Winner

Winner winner chicken dinner! Bobby and Shirley were big winners, hope they continue their special friendship. 5 Stars! Part 2 maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
generation gap!

Wonderful story, very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good to see you here

Loved reading your works on ASSTR; glad to see you've moved over here.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
They were both winners

A little confidence, a cash bonus, and a phone number in his pocket. Yes, he was a winner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I’ll bet Shirley’s 82 year old widowed mother might be interested in Shirley giving her Bobby as a birthday gift!

rnebularrnebularover 6 years ago
Veey hot

Ann, loved the fiery passion that ignited between these two. He was indeed a lucky man! Thanks for sharing and look forward to your next story!

TomorrowTodayTomorrowTodayover 6 years ago
Another great work from Ann

You're swiftly climbing to the top of my favorite authors here.

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Fun Story****

Thanks for sharing.

Still_meStill_meover 4 years ago
more reasons to look forward to Vegas!

Thanks for a great story! Nice to see positive rewards for random acts of kindness!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Love your stories

This is well written

I don't normally read mature but as I am slowly working my way thru your library

I am really thinking your my favourite author

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good. If two people "click" the old adage that "age is just a number" holds true. Your story is a good illustration of that.

JoeMo1619JoeMo1619about 1 year ago

I love your stories!

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...