All Comments on 'Jack's Place Ch. 01'

Great start, look forward to 2 and 3 -=5 for one.

Good beginning!

5

Looking forward to the next chapters. I enjoyed the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++

I have always enjoyed reading your stories, the easy flowing conversational style of writing.

Looking forward to the remainder of this story!

Such a sweet, loving story so far. Real people behaving like real people.

Looking forward to the next chanpter.

5*

I've submitted Chapter 2 as promised. Thank you for reading my story and for commenting.

with respect

DG Hear

Nice story so far, looking forward to the remaining parts.

Beautifully paced with a lovely undercurrent of emotion. as near perfect as it is possible to get. Well done!

Wondering why you didn't submit the entire story?

Honestly, I've never liked one page stories or chapters but you always have been an excellent author with great stories so because I'm one of your followers I'm sticking with you. I just unfollowed two Authors who I found out write only 'suck and fuck' stories with almost no plots. Not into that! 5 BIG ONES for the score!

Great start, the next chapter needs to be much longer. I was just getting into the story and realised it was just this page. Still great.

Little too heavy in narrative for me to give it top score, but entertaining so far. Be careful with some edit problems moving forward. They weren't too bad but enough to interrupt the flow. 4.0*

Great beginning. 5stars

Interesting characters. An easy read and so far real people behaving like real people. Believable!

Good life story.

Looking forward to the remaining chapters

I just want to take this opportunity to thank you very much for the many stories you have created and shared with us. Regardless of the comments at the end of each story (even the anonymous’s) you give us readers a small escape from the daily pressures of life as we walk through your most amazing arrangement of words and thoughts in each of your stories. It is not until we read the last word that we come back to the present, unfortunately swayed in our comments as life’s forces return to play upon our minds once again. Again, thanks so much from a reader and fan up here in Canada

I'm with RePhil, I've really enjoyed your tales as well. I've been disabled/ retired for several years and still enjoy two of the three things I've loved since childhood, music and reading - had to give up woodworking. You, Q , JPB, Slirpuff and so many more help fill many an hour. Your Santa series is a annual favorite. Thank you so very much - 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha