All Comments on 'Jack's Place Ch. 02'

Another great chapter!

5

Totaly agree with Boyd Percy's comment. So enjoying this story. 5 as always.

Chapter 3 has been sent in as promised. Thank you for reding my story.

Much appreciated

DG Hear

Whoa! Great Writing, Great Story! 10 big blazing stars! What happened?? Did Rita come home to find her BF Will banging her sister Jill? Sure sounds like it. Sounds like trouble in paradise. Somebody has cheated. Typically, as kids grow up and mature, they have only so many morals. The ones with a better moral compass usually get married and stay together. The ones that don't get divorced. Thus, the folks that are divorced, or aka "damaged goods" have issues. So if you are romancing someone in their 20s that have already been divorced, be extra cautious. They probably have been a cheater already and are much more likely to continue to be a cheater. So what is happening here? Sounds traumatic, can't wait for the next issue! Thanks, Buster2U

Great chapter - much better than the first installment. I would prefer this story in one outing, but kudos for creating anticipation in me for #3! 4.8*

Good chapter 2, awaiting the final chapter with anticipation

A lovely well paced story with a real cliff hanger at the end. Can't wait for chapter 3!

Dang it D.G., you didn't have to stop where you did, lol. Another 5 BIG ONES!

I like the story zmd the characters but it reads like a travelog. IMHO not enough character development or emotion. But what do I know.

Fantastic I can't wait for Ch. 03.

Keep adding to the backstory of the characters.

Who could have hurt Jill?

I am sure we will hear more about his daughter.

Holding breath.

A great series so far.

I’m wondering if Jill is pregnant.