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Click hereWe covered up with a sheet and went to sleep. On Sunday morning we got cleaned up and went out for lunch and then I took her home.
Monday morning Rita called off work for Jill. She said she wasn't feeling good. That's all she would say. I called back and Rita said that she couldn't talk to me now. I was really worried. What could have transpired since lunch time yesterday. Jill had never missed a day of work; in fact, she had never even been late. I was really worried. I waited till some of my employees arrived and told them I'd be back later. If they ran into a problem, I told them they should call Will.
I left the bar and went to see Jill. Rita answered the door and wasn't going to let me in. I pushed the door open and stormed in. There sitting on the couch was Jill crying with the side of her face all red and turning bruised. "What the 'Hell' happened" I asked?
End of Chapter 2, chapter 3 is on it's way
Thank you for reading my story. Comments are welcome and appreciated.
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
olddave519 months agoFantastic I can't wait for Ch. 03.
Keep adding to the backstory of the characters.
Who could have hurt Jill?
I am sure we will hear more about his daughter.
AccelarVester9 months agoI like the story zmd the characters but it reads like a travelog. IMHO not enough character development or emotion. But what do I know.
Anonymous9 months agoA lovely well paced story with a real cliff hanger at the end. Can't wait for chapter 3!
Demosthenes384bc9 months agoGreat chapter - much better than the first installment. I would prefer this story in one outing, but kudos for creating anticipation in me for #3! 4.8*
Buster2U9 months agoWhoa! Great Writing, Great Story! 10 big blazing stars! What happened?? Did Rita come home to find her BF Will banging her sister Jill? Sure sounds like it. Sounds like trouble in paradise. Somebody has cheated. Typically, as kids grow up and mature, they have only so many morals. The ones with a better moral compass usually get married and stay together. The ones that don't get divorced. Thus, the folks that are divorced, or aka "damaged goods" have issues. So if you are romancing someone in their 20s that have already been divorced, be extra cautious. They probably have been a cheater already and are much more likely to continue to be a cheater. So what is happening here? Sounds traumatic, can't wait for the next issue! Thanks, Buster2U
DG Hear9 months agoAuthorChapter 3 has been sent in as promised. Thank you for reding my story.
Much appreciated
DG Hear
