Jack's Rebirth Pt. 02

Damn, this is the best story I've read in quite some time! Thank you. I had to clean it up but listening to it with Jennifer's voice was quite the experience. Because I taught English Lit courses in college I can't help but edit the stories but it also has to be done to listen to it in Text Aloud. This story, I will follow and if the rest of your submissions are as good as this one it'll be a joy to go through each one! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Again, thank you for this one.

"...while strung out on marijuana"?? Who has ever been "strung out" on weed? I understand the phrase to mean physically addicted. On weed? No chance.

Love the humor in this series. The end of story jokes are corny as hell. So bad they've become good again. Worth a star right there. // Jack & Gloria proposing getting married within what, 2 or 3 days of knowing each other and declaring undying love for each other feels a bit too rushed.

Really don't know what to think about this. It's all too fast for my liking and that speed just makes it either unrealistic or headed towards an almighty impact.

@anon 3mnths ago. You give the impression that cops actually pull out and use their guns all the time. They don't, or at least the trained ones that aren't little girls don't. You also seem to be unaware of the incredibly high divorce rates for cops, or the even higher DV rates.

The only amazing thing about this story is that the jaded cop, and you can't be a detective without already being jaded, would take up with a woman from that side of town with that amount of baggage. Not to mention that as he was officially connected to her any sexual interaction would be viewed in a very negative light by his superiors and any judge and jury. So his little bout of white knightery already singled him out as a fairy tale and that we should suspend our disbelief.

Page 3 ... Who doesn't know how to spell fridge?? A frig on the other hand is a sexual act. Hardly appropriate when kids are in the same room.

Bear,

So sad. You CANNOT get strung out on weed. I'm a 65 yo retired Hardcore Biker who has been riding since 1969. I've met really EVIL Cops and the best of the Best Cops. So many Cops. Weed is like booze, simple, easy and seductive. I would quit smoking weed for 30 days just prove to myself I wasn't addicted. No Problems. I used a one Stage or another any drug that could be taken NON Intravenously. No freakin needles, EVER.

The speed at which this relationship 'exploded' was beyond ridiculous. However, when we read about him being cucked in the next story, we'll know exactly why that happened. No good parent would get into a relationship so fast and no man would take a woman seriously if she were so fast. It reeks of potential groomer and desperation/gold digger. Neither of which are healthy grounds for starting a relationship.

A great shame really because the bones of the story and the writing are both good.

I liked it and gave it 5 stars. While the beginning was like a normal "cheating wife" story found in this section, after meeting Gloria seemed to change him and he showed her there are good guys out there. Yes, some of it might have been over the top, but not any more that other stories in this forum. Not to mention she's already met most of his family, so she knows what she's getting into.

Engaged in like 48 hours? Some of the dialog snd side commentary was funny. But really 2 or 3 days?