Jack's Rebirth Pt. 02

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Finis

This will be handled in the next, and final, part. Thank you for bearing (heh, heh) with me. We must go out of town (again), to another funeral. As they say, the hits just keep on coming.

Now, for a while, lighten up:

Barnes and Nobles recently announced that they moved all the Apocalyptic and Post-Apocalyptic literature and books into the current events section.

OOOPS!

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RanDog025RanDog0254 months ago

Damn, this is the best story I've read in quite some time! Thank you. I had to clean it up but listening to it with Jennifer's voice was quite the experience. Because I taught English Lit courses in college I can't help but edit the stories but it also has to be done to listen to it in Text Aloud. This story, I will follow and if the rest of your submissions are as good as this one it'll be a joy to go through each one! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Again, thank you for this one.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

"...while strung out on marijuana"?? Who has ever been "strung out" on weed? I understand the phrase to mean physically addicted. On weed? No chance.

KahunabobKahunabob5 months ago

Love the humor in this series. The end of story jokes are corny as hell. So bad they've become good again. Worth a star right there. // Jack & Gloria proposing getting married within what, 2 or 3 days of knowing each other and declaring undying love for each other feels a bit too rushed.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Really don't know what to think about this. It's all too fast for my liking and that speed just makes it either unrealistic or headed towards an almighty impact.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

@anon 3mnths ago. You give the impression that cops actually pull out and use their guns all the time. They don't, or at least the trained ones that aren't little girls don't. You also seem to be unaware of the incredibly high divorce rates for cops, or the even higher DV rates.

The only amazing thing about this story is that the jaded cop, and you can't be a detective without already being jaded, would take up with a woman from that side of town with that amount of baggage. Not to mention that as he was officially connected to her any sexual interaction would be viewed in a very negative light by his superiors and any judge and jury. So his little bout of white knightery already singled him out as a fairy tale and that we should suspend our disbelief.

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